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Originally published: 20th June 2020

Image by Gerd Altmann from Pixabay

This poem was placed 2nd in Team Poetry Soup's VOGON POETRY (Really Bad Poetry) Poetry Contest.

Like wordy lorz midst mi are crewding Flertish high yon hillex hols Daffhead lines earthed vales and poodling O'er vostice valey boozer bols. With kumquats.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Date: 9/18/2020 2:56:00 AM
Excellent (I think) lol, congrats, Gary. :)
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Gary Radice
Date: 9/18/2020 3:04:00 AM
Cheers Gary...wish I'd included curdlecurts though. :)
Date: 9/17/2020 7:24:00 PM
Gary, congrats on your wonderful well done win :) <3 Hugs Eve..
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Gary Radice
Date: 9/18/2020 1:16:00 AM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 9/17/2020 5:03:00 PM
Congrats, Gary !
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Gary Radice
Date: 9/18/2020 1:15:00 AM
Thank you Line!
Date: 9/17/2020 2:29:00 PM
This was really amusing, Gary and as with John’s, I so enjoyed reading it aloud . I loved it’s inherent musicality - until the final line which made me laugh aloud!
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Gary Radice
Date: 9/17/2020 2:39:00 PM
Hi Wendy! Diolch yn fawr iawn am eich sylwadau fruitsalad hyfryd. :)
Date: 9/17/2020 12:55:00 PM
Conflagutory gabbleblotchits to you sir, for your fine placement. Now to go find a fish to put in my ear to translate your exquisitely bad Vogon verse. Vogonically yours, John
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John Watt
Date: 9/17/2020 5:09:00 PM
Lol (I think!)
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Gary Radice
Date: 9/17/2020 2:10:00 PM
Wov mutches babellus spud-u-likus o Dugloss adamassos, John!
Date: 6/20/2020 12:35:00 PM
You do horrible so well! Extra kumquats. I love, um hate it. Worst of luck to you! xomo
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Date: 6/20/2020 1:19:00 PM
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Gary Radice
Date: 6/20/2020 1:06:00 PM
Thankilie exudous on butternut squash.