New Beginnings - A Shadorma

Suzanne Delaney Avatar Suzanne Delaney - LIFETIME Premium Member Suzanne Delaney - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled New Beginnings - A Shadorma which was written by poet Suzanne Delaney. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Suzanne Delaney

Best Suzanne Delaney Poems

+ Follow Poet

New Beginnings - A Shadorma

 A new play
It's opening night
Costumes on
Lines by heart
Audience is fidgeting 
The curtain rises,

Suzanne Delaney
December 30th. 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


Comments are below...


Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
Date: 1/18/2016 3:17:00 PM
very atmospheric Suzanne a 7 gl in contest hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 1/17/2016 1:43:00 PM
This is a winner either way. Love it Suzanne. Have a blessed day....Sharon : )
Login to Reply
Delaney Avatar
Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/18/2016 12:40:00 AM
Thanks Sharon: So happy you liked it. SuZ
Date: 1/12/2016 1:10:00 PM
I like your take on this theme, Suz, very creative. Disappointed not to see it on the winners' list. ~ Regards // paul
Login to Reply
Callus Avatar
Paul Callus
Date: 1/13/2016 5:18:00 AM
The syllable count is correct; "it's" counts as one syllable.
Delaney Avatar
Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/13/2016 12:54:00 AM
Hi Paul: It is probably the syllable count in line 2. (Supposed to be 5) Kim must have counted it's - as - it is. I didn't check it in a syllable counter. What do you think?
Date: 12/31/2015 10:37:00 AM
I like it!
Login to Reply
Delaney Avatar
Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/31/2015 7:28:00 PM
Thanks Richard.
Date: 12/31/2015 4:12:00 AM
You captured it perfectly Suzanne - oh the anticipation:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Delaney Avatar
Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/31/2015 7:27:00 PM
Thanks Jan: Adhering to the syllable count makes it a bit more of a challenge Happy 2016 to you. SuZ
Date: 12/31/2015 1:13:00 AM
Lovely write....I feel the anticipation. Good luck in the contest and Happy New year!!!
Login to Reply
Delaney Avatar
Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/31/2015 7:25:00 PM
Thankyou Eileen: All the best for you in 2016. Big Hugs, SuZ
Date: 12/30/2015 10:57:00 PM
I like the freshness on the other side. I like the six line stanza... LINDA
Login to Reply
Delaney Avatar
Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/31/2015 7:21:00 PM
Ha ha I noticed my spelling of Happy in my last reply, but I suppose Flappy works, too lol If your'e dressed as a flapper. I am honored to be on your Favs list...Kir Royales all around.
Date: 12/30/2015 10:56:00 PM
Hi Suz, LOL, it's me again,, I'd never close the year on poetry soup, without saying thank you to all the poets on my favorite list. Wishing you the best this coming year **2016** Happy New Year... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Delaney Avatar
Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/30/2015 11:16:00 PM
Hi Linda: ........toasting you with Champagne, You're a favorite of mine for so many reasons, Flappy New Year