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My Diamond Girl

You’re something kind of wonderful
A diamond girl who has it all
You’re, like rose in a bed of weeds
My love, you fill my every need
Sweet pearl you are, a gem so grand
Your beauty none could understand
You have it inside, and outside
My dear you open my heart wide

My Dear, you open my heart wide
You have it inside, and outside
You tune my strings and make me sing
Such happiness to me you bring
I love the way you do kiss me
My dear how much I do love thee
A Diamond girl who has it all
You’re something kind of wonderful

My love, you fill my every need
You’re like a rose in bed of weeds
My dear, how much I do love thee
I love the way you do kiss me
Such happiness to me you bring
You tune my strings and make me sing
Your beauty, none could understand
Sweet pearl you are, a gem so grand

V&P’s Couplet Style

Created by Vera, and Peter Duggan 06 12 2017
Composed of three Stanzas of eight lines
8 syllables per line all done in couplets
Capital letters are refrain lines
Center Align; Subject Optional

1st Stanza A1 A2 B1 B2 C1 C2 D1 D2;
2nd Stanza D2 D1 E1 E2 F1 F2 A2 A1
3rd Stanza B2 B1 F2 F1 E2 E1 C2 C1

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/20/2019 12:22:00 PM
a tender and beautiful tribute to your lovely wife, peter!
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/20/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thank you Ilene. I appreciate your kind words, my friend....Peter
Date: 1/19/2019 6:07:00 PM
This is darling. Does Vera also write poetry? I should just look this up. Loved this part: "My dear how much I do love thee. A Diamond girl who has it all You’re something kind of wonderful"
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/19/2019 6:51:00 PM
Hi Caren, Vera has just come back on the site with a couple of poems which I think are good poems, but she has no faith in herself. I just hope she gets some nice comments so she can feel good about herself. Thank you for your kind words, my friend...Peter
Date: 1/19/2019 5:20:00 PM
This is so special! Very nice :)
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/19/2019 5:41:00 PM
HI Heidi, this was a style Vera and myself created. She is a poet on this site and has made a comeback with a couple of poems. She has improved so much now she has come back. When I got her into poetry she said she could never write, so I am proud of her. Thank you so much for your kind comments, my friend....peter