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Mundane Harm And Eternal Charm

I winded my way upwards to the hilly plains A path bordered by verdure and Spring flowers Enticed by a soft voice, chirping in the sky Larking in blue high, the hovering beauty i spy And the eye followed, and the lips did sigh In heaven's vast kingdom, and the wings fly Airborne feathers, hanging to strings unseen Light as the wind, tiny spirit gracefully fluttering And the path ended by a growing green wheat A sea of emerald heads shaking around few weeds And crimson rows in strips, blushed in midst of the field Slender twigs and stems of oats, the sun rays gild What the joy ,what delight, in such a vernal sight!!! Spring in poetic garment, and the breath is light ! Mild is the air, the cheerful skylark in flowing flight Peace rules and Earth streams under God's Might

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Date: 4/15/2020 8:51:00 AM
You have captured perfectly nature's masterpiece. This is a breath of scents of spring! Lovely!
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Date: 4/16/2020 3:04:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend for your sincere comments. In fact, Nature speaks her own words, we have only to copy and past, that's all, and it seems we do not understand her language very clearly, because we care less, and do not learn the lesson !!!
Date: 4/12/2020 11:55:00 PM
This is absolutely gorgeous! What a delight to read this Easter. I hope you enjoyed yours. I am Faving this gem! Blessings Poetic Flame. xxoo
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Date: 4/14/2020 11:19:00 AM
A heart warming visit Dear Connie,, and a most uplifting poetic feedback on a humble scribble; i only try to carry a piece of land from Nature to my readers hands to read. any beauty felt is just a casual event i did not mean to happen !!! stay happy-Happy Easter and blessed be always.
Date: 4/12/2020 4:07:00 PM
Great imagery in this... You have an excellent pen..
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Date: 4/14/2020 11:14:00 AM
True poetry comes from true feelings, feelings we get from beautiful Nature, reading its eternal book will surely forge a good personality and a better poetic diction. blessed be, always, Happy Easter, peace and happiness!
Date: 4/12/2020 1:55:00 PM
Hello Poetic Flame, thank you for creating this peaceful poem.As I read this poem ,I felt the heavy feeling lift away. Thank you for creating this poem. Happy Easter my friend. Enjoy your day .
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Date: 4/14/2020 11:12:00 AM
Thank you DARLENE. you have been a good friend and a humble reader, i am always indebted to you for being present when needed. Happy Easter, God bless my friend.
Date: 4/12/2020 1:54:00 PM
The charm of your poetry.. the suggestiveness of your imagery.. the sensitivity of your rendition.. the evocation of a so missed Spring! A "mundane harm" has deprived Humanity of the "eternal charm" of Nature! A poet's mission, is a mission of Love! Love for Nature, Humanity and poetry! Thank you so much, Hamid, for being true to what you venerate.. for painting a so enchanting Spring to relish in.. for bringing a lot of peace in souls.. A serene Beauty! Best regards. God bless you.
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Date: 4/14/2020 11:09:00 AM
As i stroll through Gods lands, His beauty shines, in everything i see, and what i see, i have to carry it with faith, with truth to those who deserve,those who skim not just the surface but go deep into the beauty of His creation, and i hope my own interpretation rhymes well with my avid readers. i aim to create a panoramic picture, a vision of an ideal charm. MY feelings are true. The pleasure is ever as big as my readers are so constant and faithful.Happy times Besma, blessings and happiness.
Date: 4/12/2020 9:19:00 AM
your writing is splendid and with "living colour." Thanks -- very uplifting, speaks of Eternal Hope/Spring/ Re-birth. I do say this gently: too many extra commas and semi-colons, missed in proofing. Salaams and Peace of God.
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Date: 4/14/2020 11:00:00 AM
Heartfelt thanks, and sincere emotions, i send to my brother and fellow poet. all my deep expressions of humanity, friendship on such days of strain, plague, hoping all ends well. Until then, we have to write and fight for the same reason the same goal:Peace and Happiness to Earth*