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Morning Has So much Power

Pedro’s sweet eights

Morning Has Such Power

Whenever I am sitting
In early morning hours
In silence there admitting
That morning has such power
I dance with joy within my soul
Such perfection is in my mind
I am feeling so whole
As all the world it seems so kind

My heart is filled with laughter
As something within me stirs
It is all so beautiful
How I feel I have it all
There’s nothing can eraze my joy
Oh, no there’s nothing can destroy
So beautiful this is
There’s naught can take away my bliss

Pedro’s Sweet eights
Eight lines each stanza
Each stanza in syllables of 7,7,7,7, 8,8,6,8
Rhyme sequence
First stanza  ababcdcd
Second stanza aabbccdd

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Date: 1/25/2019 6:32:00 PM
the bright of a new day brings freshness within our hearts... a poetic morning delight, peter... huggs
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/25/2019 7:27:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments Nette. I appreciate them, my friend.....Peter
Date: 1/25/2019 2:08:00 PM
Hello Peter, I like this poem. Yes the morning has so much power. It is nice to hear th silence of the morn. It is nice to see the rising of the sun. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/25/2019 6:05:00 PM
You enjoy your weekend.
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/25/2019 4:58:00 PM
Hi Darlene I thank you for your kind comments, my friend I appreciate them. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend....Peter
Date: 1/25/2019 5:32:00 AM
Whenever I removed the clock from my hindparts, like weekends/vacations, I felt this way, and now that I've completely demolished that alarm, it is a beautiful feeling to befriend the promising light of optimistic mornings. A joy to read ... CayCay
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/25/2019 5:02:00 PM
Hi Cay cay. repat retired me from work many years ago, so I have all the time I need to live in the now. sitting in the garden being me is all I really need.;/Thank you so much for your kind comments, my friend....Peter
Date: 1/25/2019 2:13:00 AM
I actually copied this formula down after I read this poem, because the lilt of it had me feeling so happy, that I knew the combination of the cadence and the joyful happy perk of this FELT like something new, and I wanted to capture it, so thank you Peter.
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/25/2019 5:07:00 PM
G'day Caren. I am so glad that my words made you happy.That style is one of my creation. like everything I do it is very simple. Not many people ever notice my styles, maybe because I don't write small.I have to much to say, so I never write short poems. I admire those who can write short. Thank you for your kind comments, my friend....Peter
Date: 1/24/2019 9:46:00 PM
You make Pedro's form delightful Peter! xxoo : )
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/25/2019 1:31:00 AM
Hi Connie. Pat Simpson called this style as a pedro style, but I'd rather go under the Name of Peter duggan. Thank you for your kind comments, my friend. I appreciate you. Have a wonderful weekend....Peter