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Missing

Am I in a valley of darkness,
Or surrounded by absolutely nothing,
Is this how others are too?
Or am i missing something?

I hear different sounds&noises,
Horns from the traffic far&far away,
Some birds chirping on a tree branch,
Bell dongs in a church with pray.

“Oops! I am sorry, Are you hurt?”
A nervous voice said in a soft tone,
“Its okay.” Said I and handed the ball back,
The team who lost were all in groans.

People jogging along the path way,
Scent of their sweat resonates the air,
A couple clicking&kissing each other,
Filled with romance in their secret lair.

“Ffffforgive me! Can i sit here please?”
“Absolutely.” I replied in a welcoming manner,
It was a woman, one of the joggers,
She talked on her cellphone with a cute stammer.

“World is such a wonderful place,”
The Thought lingered in my mind,
“So vivid, fresh and oh so beautiful,”
As i snapped my stick on the ground to find,
The path that i am supposed to take,
The direction in which it takes me home,
How fortunate it would be a jump to make,
From the blank or dark to the real vision,
Which would change when i close my eyes,
And not remain same in all the seasons.

Am I in a valley of darkness,
Or is it nothing that i see?
Is this how others are too?
Or is it me and only me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/26/2018 10:18:00 AM
Even if we have the world's happiness, if that one person is missing.. everything seems worthless..
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Suraj Grover
Date: 4/26/2018 10:31:00 AM
So true!
Date: 4/14/2018 4:55:00 AM
So beautiful poem suraj... sending best wishes to you.. :)
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Suraj Grover
Date: 4/14/2018 4:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Amaira. God bless you. :)
Date: 4/13/2018 1:17:00 PM
I miss you(poems) Suraj.. ;-) hahaa.. xoxo ~nihu ;-)
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Suraj Grover
Date: 4/14/2018 4:57:00 AM
Lol!! Coming up with a new one!! :)
Date: 4/12/2018 7:38:00 AM
Is missing someone actually related to existing love for them?
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Suraj Grover
Date: 4/12/2018 8:20:00 AM
Maybe. Or maybe it is just the nostalgia of the moments we cherish and consider special for ourself. :)
Date: 4/11/2018 5:17:00 AM
We miss someone's presence, their soothing touch, their shining eyes, their beautiful smile.. Being with them is a little piece of joy we always long to.. we can see our world standing near us when they are sitting or standing close.. all the good or bad things we go through we just want to tell them first.. we just want them beside us all the time. Everytime.. every min, every sec..
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Suraj Grover
Date: 4/11/2018 7:04:00 AM
So beautiful and touching Amelia :)
Date: 2/21/2018 3:47:00 PM
There's always something missing from our lives. There's always something we want so badly for ourselves,When we get it,,its like okay we got it. When its going afar,we are like Stop! Thats not happening! And we describe this by a single word "miss". So basically when we are happy(at peace),we try to coil up things unknowingly,and when we are sad,we think everything's merry around,when actually we dont realize our tensions are self created. To me its a deep write suraj :) ~Augustine
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Suraj Grover
Date: 2/21/2018 8:54:00 PM
Thank you for your interpretation of it Augustina. The ambiguity of words clupped together is just so amazing! Much love! :)
Date: 1/15/2018 8:52:00 AM
Great, love reading your poems
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Suraj Grover
Date: 1/15/2018 10:31:00 AM
Thank you, it means a lot! :)
Date: 1/11/2018 6:47:00 AM
I liked the way you described everything, With love~Sophie
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