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Mental Dental

Jim's dentist could not have been meaner Displaying the strangest demeanour As he yanked out his tooth He said "Want the truth? I shouldn't be here, I'm the cleaner".

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Date: 4/23/2017 5:02:00 AM
I'm loving these Limericks Ray really brightening up my day thanks. :)))
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Ray Gridley
Date: 4/23/2017 5:50:00 AM
Glad to make someone cheerful, Roy.
Date: 4/20/2017 11:05:00 AM
Good Afternoon Ray. Thank you for the smile an for the laugh because I am laughing. Poor Jim. I feel for him (lol). You did excellent with the format and you reached the Limerick essence. Well done entirely. Have a wonderful day.
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Date: 4/20/2017 1:47:00 PM
Thanks Lisa, it's good to have something to laugh at.
Date: 4/19/2017 4:25:00 PM
I'm liking this Ray.
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Ray Gridley
Date: 4/19/2017 6:57:00 PM
Thanks for your nice comment, Jean.
Date: 4/18/2017 6:01:00 PM
haha. You are really good with these.
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Date: 4/19/2017 2:00:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I keep thinking I'll run out of steam soon!
Date: 4/18/2017 8:26:00 AM
Lol, now that would be a macabre tooth nightmare! Funny Ray!~Che :)
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Ray Gridley
Date: 4/19/2017 1:58:00 PM
Thanks Che, going to a real dentist is bad enough!
Date: 4/18/2017 7:00:00 AM
ha ha ha made me lol:-) I will put up a limerick contest in the next few days ... its been a little quiet here with the Easter holidays:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/19/2017 1:57:00 PM
Cheers Jan, I look forward to writing a new limerick for your contest.
Date: 4/18/2017 6:47:00 AM
Yikes. Good limerick :)
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Ray Gridley
Date: 4/19/2017 1:56:00 PM
Thanks Agnes!