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My valentine could twist a kiss to turn the surliest face to bliss 3 Feb 2019 For Valentine Crystalline Contest Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 2/13/2019 8:01:00 PM
I wish I'd known this when I was married to Mr. Petulance! Oh, that wouldn't work, its all wrong. This is adorable, a cute cupid gem worthy of being kissing itself. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 2/14/2019 12:46:00 AM
Yes it doesn’t work if the face is ALWAYS sulky. Thank you CayCay!
Date: 2/5/2019 3:32:00 PM
You have to try a clerihew. you can still make them metrical if you want!! yeah, I hate it when a contest I want to do gets past me!
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Date: 2/3/2019 11:06:00 PM
A sweet taste of poetry, best of luck in the contest, Nina!
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Date: 2/3/2019 4:44:00 PM
so clever, NIna. Hey, I just judged my contest and noticed you were not entered!! What the heck?? I bet you could do a really great clerihew!
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 2/3/2019 5:23:00 PM
Aw sorry, there were quite a few I missed a week or two ago cos I was a bit stressed out so my brain wasn’t playing ball! Plus I find clerihews tricksy. Don’t think I can compute the uneven line length!