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Alone I stare in silence at the night and shiver with the breeze caressing cold The brilliance of the moon’s seductive light illuminates a painting to behold A ring of pink surrounds its golden glow as if a warm embrace in lovers' skies I watch the scene unfold from down below Alone I gaze in awe with sleepy eyes I think of him so many miles away awak’ning to the sun’s first gentle peep His moon has disappeared into the day and come to sweetly watch me while I sleep And yet I slumber not, as still I swoon With misty eyes I’m gazing at the moon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/7/2019 8:36:00 AM
As always you write so beautifully
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Date: 7/12/2019 3:07:00 PM
A beautiful love sonnet caressed by the moon.
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Date: 7/12/2019 3:06:00 PM
A beautiful love sonnet caressed by the moon.
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Date: 4/10/2019 9:09:00 PM
Wonderful!
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Date: 3/20/2019 3:52:00 PM
The lover's moon, the words believed by many. How many lovers pray to her. A wonderful poem shared.
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Date: 10/20/2018 10:41:00 AM
Hi Rebecca, much belated congratulations on your Poem Of The Day with this wonderful sonnet. This is such a delight to read. I love the content of this most wonderful sonnet. Your style and the sonnet knit together with such grace. Your words were born to grace the glory of the sonnet and in this piece they do Rebecca. Sing on beautiful rose. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX A fave.
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Date: 10/20/2018 7:12:00 AM
A most lovely sonnet where imagery and a sense of longing come to the fore, Becca. [belated congrats for p.o.t.d.] ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 10/18/2018 7:27:00 AM
Becca a well written and versed write. I really like your particular Sonnet. I has very good meaning and good word imagery. Looks and sounds like a nice classic to me. Amen, blessings. Well done.
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Date: 7/26/2018 5:12:00 AM
This Is Poem of the year !!!
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Becca Teagan
Date: 7/27/2018 11:45:00 PM
you are too sweet Jerry :) hugs
Date: 7/23/2018 10:40:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet, Becca.
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Date: 7/24/2018 11:45:00 PM
Thank you, Warren Doll
Date: 7/22/2018 6:33:00 PM
lovely.
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Date: 7/26/2018 5:32:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/22/2018 2:05:00 AM
Lovely piece, Becca, and congrats on POTD. Viv x
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Date: 7/22/2018 7:55:00 AM
Thanks, Viv!
Date: 7/21/2018 10:14:00 AM
Lovely Becca, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 7/22/2018 1:33:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie
Date: 7/19/2018 9:29:00 PM
A perfectly crafted English Sonnet Becca--very few can do it correctly as you have and with such a romantic brush.
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Date: 7/20/2018 11:20:00 PM
Thank you, Craig :) That means a lot. Tom is right, you taught me about sonnets.
Date: 7/19/2018 6:46:00 PM
It seems I am late to the party. Congrats on your POTD. Well deserved.
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Date: 7/22/2018 1:18:00 AM
Thank you, Rick
Date: 7/18/2018 5:38:00 PM
Your meter is very good... The ending is serene... how many of us have had misty eyes... Missing those we love so dearly..potd also... congrats.
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Date: 7/22/2018 1:14:00 AM
thank you, Silent One
Date: 7/16/2018 8:20:00 PM
Your emotions and talent wrap themselves around your words and we are left wanting more. Your use of seductive words and ideas are easy to relate to and strike a common cord of familiarity found in all our dreams. Emile.
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Date: 7/22/2018 1:14:00 AM
Thank you, Emile, I'm happy that you're able to relate to this.
Date: 7/16/2018 9:58:00 AM
Hey misty eyes.. I love the way you gaze at the moon. Your writings make be swoon. You made night sky's romance bedroom. if your lover doesn't come home soon.. then maybe.... ;). I loved your write!!
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Date: 7/22/2018 12:59:00 AM
lol thank you Lyric Man :)
Date: 7/13/2018 6:20:00 PM
Wait for him to kiss you with the first ray of his sunrise...
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Date: 7/22/2018 12:59:00 AM
:)
Date: 7/13/2018 3:04:00 PM
Oh, Yes, Becca an amazing sonnet, can feel your sentiment as i read this wonderful gem.
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Date: 7/22/2018 12:58:00 AM
Thank you so much Harry!
Date: 7/13/2018 8:19:00 AM
POTD of course!!!!! Beautiful sonnet my dear Becca!!! Love, Happy Jack XOX
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Date: 7/22/2018 12:58:00 AM
Thanks, Jackster! Hugs
Date: 7/13/2018 4:54:00 AM
A wondrous Sonnet that brings to mind the nights I spend with my wife at seaside watching the majestic moon which for us Greeks is female! Where have been my long-lost friend, Becca! Hope you are well. No need to visit as long as you are fine! God bless you!
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Date: 7/22/2018 12:55:00 AM
I bet the moon is gorgeous there in beautiful Greece, and very romantic to view it with your wife. I'm doing ok, Demetrios, thank you. Hugs
Date: 7/13/2018 2:57:00 AM
What a beautiful Sonnet Becca, so deserving of POTD, congratulations....Maria hugs
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Date: 7/22/2018 12:48:00 AM
Thank you, Maria! Hugs
Date: 7/12/2018 11:30:00 PM
This is so lovely! Dreamy and romantic... Congratulations on POTD!
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Becca Teagan
Date: 7/22/2018 12:45:00 AM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 7/12/2018 10:47:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet, the moon inspires so many wonderful writes, this is one for the ages. Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 7/22/2018 12:42:00 AM
yes, the moon is very nice to write about. Thank you, John.
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