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This is a re-post for the FEELINGS contest of one of my first poems I posted on Poetry Soup.

Loss of more

Not only did I lose you, but more,
my life’s being to fulfil awareness,
in years to come with further to adore,
as reflections of your beauty’s fairness.
Like a quartet’s melodious accord,
wanting was the togetherness of four,
a dream to beseech love’s greatest reward;
continuation of life’s chain restore.
Ornaments of beauty to give life worth,
new flowers to blossom as future holds,
in the dreams of tenderness, love’s rebirth;
but alas once more the heartache unfolds.

For a brittle heart agony befall,
in an outcast state, loss of more than all.


T.J Grén

For contest: JP Contest 5 FEELINGS
Sponsor: Jamie Pan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/2/2018 3:53:00 AM
For a brittle heart agony befall in an outcast state. Loss. And maybe growth and change just the same.
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Teppo Gren
Date: 7/2/2018 4:59:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind comments, Kai. T.J
Date: 6/10/2018 3:38:00 PM
A beauty sashaying on the path of your ache! Dream, hope and love are outshining your pain! That's the beauty of poetry as it stitches the wounds of a poet and enchants them to pen their heart out in an exquisite way! A great pleasure to read your wonderful beauty.. Stay safe and blessed.
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Date: 6/11/2018 2:20:00 AM
Thank you very much for your visit and words of encouragement, Besma. Much appreciated. T.J
Date: 11/16/2017 12:24:00 PM
So deeply n nicely composed. best Wishes
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Date: 7/30/2017 5:26:00 PM
Deeply emotional with this one Teppo. Wonderfully done with such ease. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/24/2017 2:57:00 AM
Ahh - you know how to hit the emotions "Teppo" - A beautiful write - indiana x x x
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Teppo Gren
Date: 7/24/2017 7:47:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind comments, Indiana. Always a pleasure to see you visit my poetry. T.J
Date: 7/12/2017 3:41:00 PM
Love the deepness of each and every word a joy to read.,Teppo
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Date: 7/1/2017 8:26:00 PM
Beautiful and sad
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Date: 6/23/2017 11:47:00 PM
Hi Teppo, how are you? Missing you and your awesome poetry!!
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Teppo Gren
Date: 6/24/2017 4:31:00 AM
Thank you, Jo. I'm fine. Enjoying a lovely summer weekend. I will be back at PS once I have more time. T.J
Date: 5/11/2017 10:47:00 AM
Teppo, a powerful, deep and emotional write.
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Date: 4/19/2017 12:38:00 PM
Wow TJ what a wonderfully penned sad write, your pen drips with emotion on this one, congrats for high mark on top 100 well deserved, glad you're back!
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Date: 4/15/2017 4:00:00 PM
Hello TJ, A very sad and quite emotional sonnet -- absolutely. But a sonnet with your usual touch of masterful imagery and a passionate aura of poetic expression. A Marvelous Write!! SEVEN/FAVE IN MY BOOK!! Best Easter Wishes, Gary
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Date: 4/6/2017 8:42:00 PM
Emotional pain often leads to feelings of physical pain for those who experience things very deeply... So sad, and so true in many ways... Very, very well written and expressed, TJ... Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/4/2017 2:59:00 PM
So sadly well done Teppo...
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Date: 4/4/2017 12:08:00 AM
Rather sad T.J....Good luck on the contest.
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Date: 4/3/2017 11:49:00 AM
Depression has taken a hold of your thoughts and you need direction to not understand your feelings, but to disarm their impact on your life. Emile.
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Date: 4/2/2017 11:32:00 AM
Teppo even though this is a sad write. It is quite a gem. All the best for the contest :)
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Date: 4/1/2017 5:11:00 AM
My friend, thy pen sings such a sad song in this great sonnet! I could feel the recurring heartache in all its massive depth of agony. Hopeless and helpless both amply painted, Truly superb sonnet-eering! A7 and a fav...
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Date: 3/29/2017 3:32:00 PM
It's sad, none of us escape loss of love, you have penned this moving piece with beautiful language that deepens the emotions. The last line is incredible. A remarkable poem always a pleasure to read your lovely writing TJ :-) blessings, lynn
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Date: 3/28/2017 11:21:00 PM
This is wonderful Teppo, it takes the reader on an emotional journey, Good luck in the contest. Its my fav. poem of the day for sure.
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Date: 3/29/2017 1:25:00 AM
Thank you very much for your wonderful support and comments, Maria. T.J
Date: 3/28/2017 1:53:00 AM
Hi Teppo, Lovely poem my friend, so sad, good luck in the contest, take care......Vera
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Date: 3/29/2017 1:24:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vera. Appreciated. T.J
Date: 3/27/2017 6:08:00 PM
Hi T.J. the best of luck in the contest. Emotions ever flow within your work. You have the skill to bring them forth in such a way that the reader can feel the emotions deep within themselves. Your work is always worth the dropping by and reading my friend. In every write the emotions touch me. This has to be a seven and a fave T.J. Your Friend always....Mike.
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Teppo Gren
Date: 3/29/2017 1:24:00 AM
I remain grateful for your continued support and encouragement, Mike. Thank you very much for your wonderful comments, seven and fave. T.J
Date: 3/27/2017 1:24:00 PM
A beautiful but sad poem. I wish you well in the contes, Teppo.
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Date: 3/27/2017 1:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Ralph. T.J
Date: 3/26/2017 3:10:00 PM
Ouch... Well done, Teppo! : ) But ouch...
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Teppo Gren
Date: 3/27/2017 1:36:00 PM
Thank you, Doug. T.J
Date: 3/26/2017 9:31:00 AM
A beautiful sonnet about loss, Teppo:) always good to read you:)
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Date: 3/27/2017 1:35:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind comments, Jo. T.J
Date: 3/25/2017 12:42:00 PM
written with such depth and stark imagery, teppo... greeat stuff..huggs
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Teppo Gren
Date: 3/27/2017 1:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Nette. Hugs. T.J
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