LIVE

Live to Dance Live to Sway Live to Love Live to Pray Live the Day Live the Night Live the Sorrow Live the Fight Live the Old Live the Young Live the Bold Live the shunned Live the Joy Live the Woe Live the laughter Live the Foe Live, Live, Live With all your might Live, Live, Live Til the end of the light

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Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/10/2022 4:31:00 PM

No, not so much like the previous ending sounded. "Delight" just standing there without any words to make it meaningful, like "Let life be a delight" or I can suggest Live, Live, Live 'till the end of the light. Thanks - Marshall

Angela Tune
Date: 1/10/2022 4:41:00 PM

Yes, I like that, and it implies no ending also for light in a spiritual sense has no ending, so a sort of paradox....I’m over thinking though now and it’s 1am here...haha! Thankyou Marshall. Angie

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/10/2022 2:08:00 PM

Live, Live, Live, yes we will, Angela, but how can i turn out the light? The switch is way beyond our grasp! When i recited my head danced a little! Very nice! Thanks - Marshall

Angela Tune
Date: 1/10/2022 2:38:00 PM

Yes, I completely agree....hmmmm I toyed with that last bit, doesn’t sound right does it