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Lady 5

Level head and curving hips,
the number five is womankind -
a rosebud core with chilli tips.
Level head and curving hips,
fear my tongue and crave my lips,
then find the angles of my mind.
Level head and curving hips...
the number five is womankind. 


4 May 2019
For Andrea Dietrich’s contest “Celebrate May with a Triolet”

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Date: 5/18/2019 4:44:00 PM
Love how you addressed the theme, Nina! Congrats on your well-deserved Podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 5/29/2019 3:46:00 PM
Thank you Sandra :-)
Date: 5/17/2019 6:08:00 PM
what a fabulous take on number 5, love this gem so much am faving it probably the first and last triolet I will fave lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 5/18/2019 1:35:00 AM
Haha thank you Jan, I am TRULY honoured!
Date: 5/17/2019 2:43:00 PM
Well done, Nina. Congrats on your silver medal win.
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 5/17/2019 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Line!
Date: 5/17/2019 1:45:00 PM
Sensual and creative, Nina...love the ease and smooth flow of your lines. Congratulations on a merited high-flying win. Regards // paul
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 5/17/2019 1:49:00 PM
Thank you very much Paul!
Date: 5/16/2019 8:10:00 AM
Nina, back to say congrats on your win. John
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 5/16/2019 12:04:00 PM
Thank you very much John!
Date: 5/16/2019 5:16:00 AM
No chances) Congrats, Nina.
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 5/16/2019 12:03:00 PM
Buahaha - thanks Kurt!
Date: 5/15/2019 7:54:00 PM
I love this! So sensuous! Congrats!
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 5/16/2019 12:03:00 PM
Why thank you Kim - from reading your work, I think you must have a “rosebud core with chilli tips” too! :x)
Date: 5/15/2019 6:42:00 PM
I knew Andrea would love this gem Nina! I left a comment I don't see?? This happens often. My comments disappear. So happy to see this received a high placement Nina. Congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 5/16/2019 12:01:00 PM
Oh no Connie, that’s weird! Not the computer gremlins again :-( But thank you!
Date: 5/15/2019 5:33:00 PM
Though slightly irregular with syllables, this is just AWESOME, Nina. Nobody did five as well as YOU. Congrats for your win.
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 5/16/2019 12:00:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! Oops I missed that it had to be even syllables. Ironically I actually took the odd syllable OUT to make it more punchy! Never mind, really glad you liked it! Thank you for my placement :-)
Date: 5/9/2019 11:07:00 PM
Shades of Mae West and Marilyn Monroe, all wrapped up in Chanel Number 5! (that's a perfume, just in case you're not familiar with it)
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 5/10/2019 1:10:00 AM
Thank you Michelle! (Just as well I didn’t think it was a TV station) ;-)
Date: 5/7/2019 11:00:00 PM
Very cool, of course!!! :)
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 5/8/2019 1:06:00 AM
Thank youPS!
Date: 5/6/2019 2:34:00 PM
Very nicely and cleverly done, Nina, best of luck in the contest. John
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Date: 5/6/2019 8:54:00 AM
"Fear my tongue and crave my lips . . ." Speaking as a man, I have never heard a woman described more perfectly! You amaze me dear Nina!
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Date: 5/5/2019 4:39:00 PM
Hmm, 5 is Jupiter, if I'm not misteken. Jupiter is called Guru is Sanskrit. Now I understand why women may be gurus in tantra. I'm affraid there's nothing left for me in the related contest. By the way, I wrote about 5 too) P.S.: I checked. 5 is Mercury in the vedic numerology! I have a chance))
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Date: 5/4/2019 8:51:00 AM
Wow! So cool. :))) Good luck in the contest! xomo
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Date: 5/4/2019 6:12:00 AM
Oof... I love this. Awesome write Nina, your triolet is my favorite so far! Your poem is a shoo-in for the top! Best of luck in the contest! XOXO - Briauna
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Date: 5/4/2019 6:04:00 AM
May has never been half this sensual or sexy before, so on our behalf, we all thank you!
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