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Rispetto

In the Presence of God

I walk through the meadow see such a nice glow
The birds they do sing so much beauty they bring
The grass how it grows, as the river it flows
The birds on the wing, What a beautiful thing
Black cockatoo’s feel all the strength of their show
With sweetness, and beauty the church bells do ring
There are so many places that I have trod
 Now I tread the sod in the presence of God

2 February 2019

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Date: 2/2/2019 11:08:00 PM
Your rispetto is a bravo! It includes all of my favorite scenes, and God too. Well done indeed!
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Date: 2/3/2019 4:45:00 PM
G'day Caren. This is the first time I've ever tried A Rispetto. Nice to write short poems for a change. Thank you so much, My friend for your kind comments....peter
Date: 2/2/2019 4:57:00 PM
YOu really should enter this in the contest so that others can read it when she does her winner list, Peter. It's wonderful.
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sidney dugan
Date: 2/2/2019 5:11:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments Andria. I have not done contests for years. I just love to write my stuff. I fancied doing that style When I read the Barons entry. I appreciate Your nice comments. My friend. Have a great weekend....Peter
Date: 2/2/2019 11:16:00 AM
Beautiful ! It reminds me of a few meadows, I have loved going to in my life :)
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Date: 2/2/2019 4:31:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi. I much appreciate your kind words, my friend. All the best ...Peter
Date: 2/2/2019 8:38:00 AM
Sidney, if this is for the contest, it hasn't been entered.
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sidney dugan
Date: 2/2/2019 4:35:00 PM
G'day Carolyn. No It's not for the contest. I just fancied doing the style. I am not a lover of contests, I just love to write. Have a great weekend, my friend....Peter
Date: 2/2/2019 8:02:00 AM
Lovely image Peter, we look forward to that day. Tom.
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sidney dugan
Date: 2/2/2019 4:50:00 PM
thank you so very much Tom. Your kind comments are always a pleasure to read, my friend....peter
Date: 2/2/2019 6:37:00 AM
A wonderful rispetto. So beautiful imagery.
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sidney dugan
Date: 2/2/2019 4:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Victor. Always happy to read your kind comments, my friend....Peter