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I Went Dark Today

I Went Dark Today

I went dark today
anger has taken over my mind,
I'm not very loving or kind, I'm ashamed to say
it not a very pleasent time.
I'm angry as hell, and I can't control it in any way.
of this I will say.
My love did treat me rough,
and for that I hate her so much.
I don't want to say one word to her
I'm locked up like a giant clam.
It's going to be a while until the love in me returns,
all in due time,
Perhaps tomorrow, hopefully by noon
When rainbows will make a path
I have gone dark,
A shadow cast over my soul
I hope it does not last for very long.
I only know that I feel like crawling up like a ball,
And roll myself into a big hole.

By Marc Acrich

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/31/2018 9:35:00 AM
Hello Marc, I have read both poems and they are really good poems.If you are writhg a book put these poems into it. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/31/2018 10:22:00 AM
Thank you, you do wonders for my self esteem im up to #60 editing Andrea ditriech on here is helping me do that after i get all my 350 edited then we will discuss abook not to make money just ot have
Date: 5/30/2018 1:52:00 PM
Hello Marc, you know something -you are good doing a prose poem.I've never done one. I see nothing wrong with your style in poetry. I feel you are doing a great job creating your poetry.is my opinion.Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/30/2018 2:34:00 PM
Perhaps you my dear will love me for an eternity. Perhaps you will smile whenever you see me. Perhaps we will stay together for the rest of our lives. Perhaps we will live long lives. Perhaps we will have nothing to be sad about again. Perhaps we will just feel good that would be splendid. Perhaps we will have nice children. Perhaps we will be rich. Perhaps we can be happy. Perhaps our loved one will live long lives too. Perhaps we will have many friends. Perhaps we can go to fancy restaurants together. Perhaps we can get a doggy. Perhaps you will hold me close when we lie down to sleep. Perhaps we can live without any fighting. Perhaps we can go to the picture show and enjoy a movie. Perhaps time will stop for us Perhaps. Perhaps all this that I mentioned will come true. By Marc Acrich
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Date: 5/30/2018 2:33:00 PM
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Date: 5/30/2018 2:32:00 PM
Thank you, have you ever heard this when describing a certain artist someone will say well this artist had no formal training in art , but nevertheless he goes down in history as well.  That's what im about every poem is different and all kinds of things spring up from my ideas did you read procrastination -------------------------------------------------------------------
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Date: 5/30/2018 2:32:00 PM
---- My Friend Is A ProcrastinatorI will see my chiropractor soon,Any day nowOh yeah!I will get a massage real soon since my body feels to tight Oh yeah!I will call direct tv for a better service mine sucksOh yeah!I will go to Target and buy that small device my friend Marc is always mentioning called a chromecasterOh yeah!I'm going to see a lawyer that Debbie suggested to do my will for $100 dollars only.Oh yeah, sure you will!So many things I must do, yet I do nothing at alli only sit and look out into space.Oh Yeah!You can lead a horse to water, But you will never be able to get him to drinkMy favorite quoteOh yeah!By Marc Acrich
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Date: 5/30/2018 2:20:00 PM
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Date: 5/20/2018 5:23:00 PM
VERY nicely done, Marc. One for your book!
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Date: 5/20/2018 5:56:00 PM
You really think so/ im insecure about my poems, if you say it's good I believe you. All I need is a good title, then the poem unfolds from there. i enjoyd reading yours to ,
Date: 5/18/2018 8:17:00 PM
I love it that your love treated you so rough, and you hate her so much, and yet tomorrow by noon you'll probably forgive her. This is the epitome of love after all. The forgive part.
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Date: 5/18/2018 10:06:00 PM
We are like an old Jewish couple I get pissed off not as often as i use to but sometimes in about ten minutes all is well, please read I pulled over i like that one im not proud of all my poems, some are good, some are bad, but lately i seem to be doing good stuff, and like always i cannot say if it a sonnet or or whatever it what i do but every day brings a new style prose maybe ? Years ago I read a short story by Hemingway all the story was he was driving in Europe, he pulled over went to a ledge and looked down and saw am fishing , he got back in his car and drove of so simple, but it turned out to be my favorite story I don't know it just put me right there made me feel all melancholy this is what i tried to do with this one, https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/i_just_pulled_my_car_over_1022729
Date: 5/18/2018 10:47:00 AM
Hurt can definitely make us feel like this. Hopefully each day that passes lessens the pain :)
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