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her gray hair bridges the slate sky and tawny tide -- uneven footprints

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Date: 4/25/2013 3:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this very creative and descriptive work..I can just see the scene..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
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Date: 4/24/2013 2:58:00 PM
great imagery in this one. such a grey day!!
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Date: 4/24/2013 11:28:00 AM
Su, you blew me away with this one! It is one of the best haiku I have seen. I loved the alliteration of the second line, and the overall image is described so well. I could see this moment perfectly in my mind. Congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 4/24/2013 5:15:00 AM
many congratulations Suzette xx
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Date: 4/23/2013 6:26:00 PM
Congrats on this outstanding haiku being on the winner's list Suzette!
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Date: 4/23/2013 3:52:00 PM
Congrats on your grand win.
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Date: 4/23/2013 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations.. beautiful..
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Date: 4/23/2013 12:15:00 PM
Perfect haiku about my favorite place to be...Congratulations, Su! - Tim
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Date: 4/23/2013 10:08:00 AM
good one Su! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/23/2013 9:21:00 AM
Wow.........this is so unique and creative..........excellent... sooooo excellent!!
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Date: 4/23/2013 12:48:00 AM
Wow, I'll have to agree with Chris. I can't believe I haven't happened upon you sooner.
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Date: 4/19/2013 6:35:00 PM
:) Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2013 1:51:00 PM
Su, this is a superb haiku! The monochromatic analogy makes for an entertaining haiku read.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 4/19/2013 1:56:00 PM
Thanks. It is high praise coming from you, Chris. :-D