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The life that courses through my veins, An inner spirits errantly, Soul endorse my earthy domains, The life that courses through my veins, My noumenon lights what remains, Embracing effervescingly, The life that courses through my veins, An inner spirits errantly. Date: 06/04/2019

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Date: 6/5/2019 5:56:00 PM
Here's to your noumenon lighting your way in life, William. Nicely done triolet! (And thanks for helping me learn this, for me, new word). Appreciated. :) gw
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/5/2019 6:16:00 PM
And you've given me, whereto, none I've gave credit--for shame as I turn my hand over for a slap deserved--thanks GW, Aloha William
Date: 6/5/2019 3:34:00 AM
Have you studied metaphysics? Interesting poem, cute picture.
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Date: 6/5/2019 3:48:00 AM
Philosophy in early 70's I dabbled lightly for two years, and picture, at the time, of my 1 year old great grandson, who's now a hyperactive 5 year old, and whose grandfather sitting on my lap in my profile picture at 1 year old--uncanny resemblance--THANKS Victor, Aloha William
Date: 6/4/2019 6:09:00 PM
Nice rhythmic lines. CUTE picture.
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Date: 6/4/2019 7:50:00 PM
Thanks so much Andrea--picture of my great-grandson at age 1, he's a hyperactive 5 year old now, and of my profile picture, I am holding his grandfather at age 1--uncanny how they look so much alike? Aloha William
Date: 6/4/2019 4:13:00 PM
Love the Triolet, and your poetry, that enhances the form..
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Date: 6/4/2019 7:43:00 PM
I am humbled by your astute share harry, Aloha William