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Eruption

My fingers rest inches
from yours. The air
crackles. Any moment,
sparks will fly,
lightning strike.

I dare not think further.
It might wake the volcano.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/20/2019 7:54:00 PM
Well penned, Agnes. Strong emotions.
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Date: 3/16/2019 8:17:00 AM
Very Good...There maybe an eruption...
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Date: 3/14/2019 11:53:00 PM
Sensuous and sexy. You have written an entire romance novel in twenty-six words. Your writing is powerful today, Agnes!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/15/2019 6:35:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. I do like this one.
Date: 3/12/2019 6:25:00 PM
Yowza!! I really like this!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/12/2019 9:13:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 3/12/2019 6:25:00 PM
'the air crackles' - suspenseful! Love that electric moment!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/12/2019 9:12:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle.
Date: 3/12/2019 12:56:00 PM
Why not? Well done Agnes...
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/12/2019 2:49:00 PM
Because volcanoes are unpredictable?
Date: 3/12/2019 11:11:00 AM
Passion! Very nice :)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/12/2019 2:49:00 PM
thank you :)
Date: 3/12/2019 7:54:00 AM
A whole lot goes on in a little bit of charged air, you have captured that tension exquisitely. Been there, so intoxicating.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/12/2019 8:22:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen.
Date: 3/12/2019 6:48:00 AM
I can feel the sparks nicely done ElsaR
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/12/2019 7:19:00 AM
Thank you, Elsa.