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She worries that her softest bloom is gone,
The beauty that was hers in younger years.
She reminisces days of early dawn,
When flawless skin awoke to gleeful cheers.

She frets her steps have lost their sultry dance,
Her slender figure time has cast away.
She dreads her crown to white will soon advance,
So feels it is in vain to hide her gray.

But I do not see what her mirror shows,
For ever since we met her beauty glows.
Her smile, her lively eyes and button nose,
Still weaken my strong knees down to my toes.

No matter what the mirror says to her,
Her beauty moves my heart with love to stir.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/22/2018 7:11:00 PM
Gorgeous write, Angel, and it contains all the elements that make superb poetry from average. Absolutely love it! Blessings, my friend! :-)
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Angel L Villanueva
Date: 12/22/2018 10:51:00 PM
Thank you very much, Gregory. I sincerely appreciate your encouraging comment.
Date: 12/20/2018 8:59:00 AM
Real beauty comes from within us. It glows unceasingly even at old aged. Thank you for sharing, Angel.
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Angel L Villanueva
Date: 12/20/2018 7:03:00 PM
Thank you, Estela.
Date: 12/2/2018 8:13:00 PM
Hello Angel,this is a poem that shows beauty is there in and out. I like this poem. have a nice evening my friend.
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Angel L Villanueva
Date: 12/3/2018 9:33:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene.
Date: 12/2/2018 7:34:00 PM
Angel, nicely done poem, we never see our beauty , but others see our souls ... Congratulations on your win.
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Angel L Villanueva
Date: 12/3/2018 9:33:00 PM
Many thanks, Eve.
Date: 11/23/2018 12:56:00 PM
Beautiful expressions Angel, our wive's do continue to amaze us in spite of the years taking their toll, on them...and us.
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Date: 11/23/2018 8:04:00 PM
They sure do! Very lovely flowers they are. Thank you, John.
Date: 11/23/2018 12:53:00 PM
Lovely, Angel. A FAVE for me.
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Angel L Villanueva
Date: 11/23/2018 7:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line! :)
Date: 11/22/2018 11:59:00 PM
Very nice sonnet. I enjoyed the shift in rhyme scheme at the turn. A poem your cherished love should cherish forever.
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Angel L Villanueva
Date: 11/23/2018 5:54:00 AM
Thank you. Much appreciated, Phillip.
Date: 11/22/2018 11:18:00 PM
How lovingly you describe love’s enduring quality through the passage of time! Beautifully written, Angel! Enjoyed this very much! :)
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Angel L Villanueva
Date: 11/22/2018 11:32:00 PM
Thank you for your very nice comment, Laura. I very much appreciate it.