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Below is the poem entitled ELEGANT BEAUTY which was written by poet Judy Emery. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I Seen all the sailors looking at me
why they where toast to my beauty
my soft fair skin they love so much
my elegant moves as I walk
they love the way I talk
they get so much pleasure 
calling out my name
But to me it’s all the same game
without a thought of interest in anything 
they had to say all advantage is mine
I am the Queen of Darken Dreams
I used to watch the slaves of all color
When they would speak about me
I would measure their enthusiasm
Oh, who Dark Angel eyes would spark
every time I would call him old man
It was like I was seeing the moon fall into the sea
whenever he would look at me
praised he would say is a certain sense of duty
Oh, my queen you hold all beauty
When you smile, you calm the sea
When you talk many slaves
hear what it is you had to say
your beauty shines a light into the slave’s eyes
for a life time
Your beauty is in every mirror
Oh. Moonlight my queen
Your skin glistened upon the sea 
of darken dreams
Dark Angel would say
I could swim in your eyes
They look like the open sea
You flower the soul of many
you give the darkness hope for light
Each breath you take is another delight
This is all my personal advantage
You are my queen in darken dreams.

Poetic Judy Emery © 1983
The Queen of Darken Dreams Poetic Lilly Emery

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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