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Destiny

We met,
may be it was a coincidence,
We talked,
may be the path was already layed,
We began liking each other,
may be that was in our stars,
But to love each other selflessly,
this is what we really craved.

We went to places together,
may be thats what follows,
We started getting closer,
may be thats the nature’s course,
We understood every vibe,
may be it was the time we spent,
To stick with each other at all time,
we were the real source.

We expressed our desires,
may be thats the harmones talking,
We desired the passionate intimacy,
may be that what our fire igniting,
We created our own world,
may be that was the heart playing games,
But we embraced each other with our flaws,
Thats what we shared without a secrecy.

We got this gift at such a crucial time of our lives,
May be it was all gods work,
We decided to be together forever,
May be that was afterall meant to be,
We created the future we always wanted,
May be our luck had a role in this too,
But we held each other’s hand always,
Thats how we wrote our destiny.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/30/2018 12:23:00 PM
I am 5feet, fat, dark in colour.. will any guy ever love me? Or just keep sharing my flaws with me without secrecy? :D :')
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Suraj Grover
Date: 4/30/2018 12:37:00 PM
Well..first of all..you shouldn’t judge love on the basis of your looks&physique. If that was true, celebrities wouldnt have to face million dollar divorces. And moreover, why would you want anyone to love you for such a fragile thing as beauty? Wouldn’t it be so amazing that someone who truely loves who you are deep within and how much love you possess. Lots of good wishes Augustina. :)
Date: 4/14/2018 2:58:00 PM
Oh how cute story is this.. So nicely written suraj :)
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Suraj Grover
Date: 4/14/2018 10:32:00 PM
Thank you Shivani :)
Date: 3/31/2018 12:23:00 PM
Read your last comment :) so are flaws really beautiful? Or do they bother us having been existing in people we care about? :)
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Suraj Grover
Date: 3/31/2018 1:41:00 PM
Someone’s laugh maybe flawed, but it may remind you that they are unique. Some habit may be weird, but thats what sets them apart. Some behavioural aspect may differ, but thats what you chose to love and be with. Not only good parts and happiness,but also in bad phase and sorrow.
Date: 3/31/2018 7:31:00 AM
Is it true that we cant see the flaws of people we love? Or we see but choose to just ignore them?
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Suraj Grover
Date: 3/31/2018 8:16:00 AM
We can pin point flaws even in “Mona Lisa”..or we can accept her with all her flaws and her unique smile! :)
Date: 3/29/2018 11:55:00 AM
Do the most important people of our lives come into our lives by coincidence suraj? :)
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Suraj Grover
Date: 3/29/2018 11:59:00 AM
I believe most people enter in our lives due to our decisions- it may be related to career, personal life etc..you can call it co incidence or the path you chose in the form of a written destiny or ur own handwritten destiny..and very few of them actually have a purpose in our lives..a real chapter which defines our phase of life.
Date: 3/27/2018 12:55:00 PM
Great piece of write dear poet.. so does selfless love lead us to some destination in our our life or just gives us some moments of happiness? :)
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Suraj Grover
Date: 3/27/2018 12:59:00 PM
The meaning of life is in the journey and not the destination..and maybe, just maybe with a love so true, one can definitely alter the course to destination too..and have both the moments of happiness as well as the destiny it fulfills.
Date: 3/27/2018 6:45:00 AM
Do you also think you are the one for her?? Hehee! Cheers to you both"s together coming happy days, with or without the help of destiny ;) xoxo /nihu/
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Suraj Grover
Date: 3/27/2018 7:03:00 AM
Thank you neha! God bless you ! :)
Date: 3/26/2018 12:53:00 PM
Never leave her hand. :) God bless you suraj :) ~sophie~
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Suraj Grover
Date: 3/26/2018 12:55:00 PM
Never! :) thank you so much sophie! Lots of best wishes!
Date: 3/26/2018 10:16:00 AM
Your poem succeeded with the lines "we held each others hands thats how we wrote our destiny" so i was asking is it really possible? two people in love can change destiny, by choosing to be together despite the odds? Or do you believe in the normal defination of destiny? Which says the planning is already done. It may or may not be as u desire? :)
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Suraj Grover
Date: 3/26/2018 10:18:00 AM
I believe love, trust and dedication can change everything and pave your own path!
Date: 3/26/2018 5:59:00 AM
Aah! Quite an interesting writeup mate! So does this really work? Can we really change our destiny? And get something which we may not get normally?
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Date: 3/26/2018 8:25:00 AM
Isnt that the whole dilemma? Do we plan our destiny? Or is our destiny already written for us?