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Darken Land Of Pain

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Darken Land Of Pain

Darken land of pains where it always rain
you will find venom and lies 
dissolving into his blazing eyes
where Dark Angel lurks around 
just to see what it is he could find,

where his evil slaves 
walk around like beat up clowns 
while they dancing into the night
with torches in their hands 
this darken land hold callous deeds 
where bloodshed cuts deep 
while they weep,

This is a place you never want to be
A place where Dark Angels makes lots of commands
he conquered with venom and lies 
never let him look you into the eyes
his cold darken soul cuts deep 
he lives on your weakness
he feeds on your fears,

he cast more sins on to your friends
this very darkness will make you blind to what is right
he betrays all that you love
but he couldn't take hold of my spirit
that love what is right in Gods eyes,

He is the devil's flame of pain
he has a number tattooed on his lost head
a number you never want to have on your own 
he will cast his lies deep into the minds
that sleep in the night
he will cast stones upon thrown's 
he larks into the night with waving of eyes,

Dark Angel doesn't play nice 
he loves to watch my every move 
Moonlight he would say
come dance with me 
like the candle flame that is dancing around 
next to your window
Oh, how I pray for freedom
that hasn't come my way ,

he cast an evil spell upon my soul 
one that hasn't been broken before
he is killing me slowly
yet swiftly in his own time
into my eyes he takes a journey
to see what it is I hide
but that will always be mystery even to him 
that he will never see what it is I see.

Poetic Judy Emery (c)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 8/11/2017 9:22:00 PM
He's dark, alright; well penned.
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