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By The Time By the time you find this you will have already felt an emptiness by the time you find this you will almost unknowingly fear to open it it will feel strange it will unfold slowly By the time you read this it will dawn that something is wrong by the time you read this it will flow into your heart I am missing I am gone By the time you finish this you will find your mind will be racing by the time you finish this you will recall my last real smile only then will you hear my last words only then will you begin to understand by the time you lay this down it will still be open by the time you lay this down you will wonder who to call time will seem to flood into a collage time will seem to slow to a crawl by the time they find me it will only then become so clear by the time they find me I will already have become a memory that last kiss will be a little sweeter that last kiss will live forever

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Date: 1/28/2019 9:50:00 AM
Chase, congratulations on POTD. So dark and well written. Welcome to Poetry Soup. All the best~ Warren
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Chase Brown
Date: 1/29/2019 10:27:00 PM
Thank you, I was at a very dark spot when I wrote this and wrote it in just a few minutes as a way to crawl from the darkness.
Date: 1/25/2019 12:33:00 AM
Wow. Chilling. Beautifully penned, Chase.
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Chase Brown
Date: 1/29/2019 10:27:00 PM
Thank you so very much.
Date: 1/24/2019 4:43:00 PM
I found this really interesting to read and well written, I could honestly feel every emotion that was wrote- amazing x
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Chase Brown
Date: 1/29/2019 10:29:00 PM
Thank you, means more than you could know. Peace.
Date: 1/24/2019 12:53:00 PM
Just reading this literally gives me that sunken feeling in the bottom of your stomach when you know something is very wrong. Fantastic insight into emotions.
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Chase Brown
Date: 1/29/2019 10:29:00 PM
I just wrote where I was. Thank you.
Date: 1/20/2019 10:01:00 PM
This is beauty!!! I felt it, I cryed it I screamed it! The feels!!!!
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Chase Brown
Date: 1/29/2019 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, I never expected anyone to feel me, so I have been blown away from all the positive words. Peace
Date: 1/20/2019 9:58:00 PM
won impressive poetic expression
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Chase Brown
Date: 1/29/2019 10:32:00 PM
a very heartfelt thanks, peace.
Date: 1/15/2019 4:07:00 PM
Welcome to soup Chase, I think I read this is time your writing is excellent my friend keep it up!
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Chase Brown
Date: 1/29/2019 10:33:00 PM
Thank you. Peace.
Date: 1/15/2019 2:52:00 PM
Hey Chase, welcome to soup. deep write, very emotional, Hope you are alright - talk to us if you need us -
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Chase Brown
Date: 1/15/2019 3:28:00 PM
Wow, thank you so much.
Date: 1/15/2019 2:29:00 PM
Wow. Heavy, potent, excellent ink. Welcome to PoetrySoup Chase! xomo
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Chase Brown
Date: 1/15/2019 3:29:00 PM
Thank you, you always wonder if others see it like you do.