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Brrrrrrrrrrr

Shivers in the winter Shivers down my spine Shivers on my fingertips Shivers make me frown Brrrrr it’s really cold here But yet the beauty holds The crisp and placid hedgerow The starlight soon unfolds Shivers on my eyeballs Shivers on my nose Shivers on my earlobes Shivers on my toes Mountains topped with snow A wonderous sight indeed Cows and geese at waters edge Iced lochs, no care they need Shivers on my knees now Shivers up my thighs Shivers in my scalp I’m freezing, oh what a surprise!

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Date: 12/23/2021 1:32:00 PM
Quite warm here this Christmas but then again, it is always quite warm here at Christmas. : ) Enjoyed your poem, it made me shiver.
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Angela Tune
Date: 12/23/2021 1:39:00 PM
Flippin freezing here in Scotland uk, I’ve got electric blanket on as I type I’m so cold...brrrrrr
Date: 12/21/2021 7:13:00 PM
Hey Angie…..think I might prefer really cold atm….42degrees predicted here for Christmas Day!! Disgusting Ha! Enjoyed your chilly poem. Cheers Debx
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Angela Tune
Date: 12/22/2021 4:19:00 AM
42 degrees....what the heck! Glad you enjoyed it Deb xxx
Date: 12/21/2021 10:47:00 AM
so glad we dont have any snow as yet, your words chilled me I need my blanket now lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Angela Tune
Date: 12/21/2021 12:53:00 PM
Haha, it’s Flippin freezin up here...brrrrrrr! :) xxx
Date: 12/21/2021 10:20:00 AM
Brrr I can feel the chill in your verse Angela, don't suppose you'll be going for a dip in the Loch lol. Tom
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Angela Tune
Date: 12/21/2021 12:52:00 PM
Tom, it’s freezing up here....brrrrrr! They do a New Years dip in Farr Beach, erm! Think I will just watch this year :) x