Blue Jay Joy

blue jay nature's sea cyan clouds clap in forest flight through sunset steam May 11th 2020 Contest: Haiku Blue Jay Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 5/15/2020 11:53:00 AM

Beautiful write Chantelle, congratulations for your win. xomo

Date: 5/15/2020 7:08:00 AM

Beautifully descriptive. Regards —MDJ

Date: 5/14/2020 5:53:00 PM

gorgeous imagery Chantelle, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 5/14/2020 4:13:00 PM

Chantelle, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku!

Date: 5/14/2020 12:31:00 PM

Chantelle, I really liked your "blue jay nature's sea", and your "sunset steam" clouds. So picturesque! Congrats on your win, my friend! John

Date: 5/14/2020 12:10:00 PM

Loved the alliteration in "cyan clouds clap", gave the haiku an additional charm. Congratulations on your win :)

Date: 5/11/2020 5:21:00 PM

Good one, Chantelke Best, dear friend Panagiota xxoo

Date: 5/11/2020 11:21:00 AM

That's imagery...blue jays against sunset stream

Date: 5/11/2020 10:54:00 AM

Hello Chantelle, a lovely poem. The blue jays are beautiful birds. I see them often. Enjoy your day my friend.

Date: 5/11/2020 10:53:00 AM

This is truly evocative of joy, 'sunset stream' - beautiful! Wonderful title too-