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They say I'm too young,
To wish to turn blue today,
I really want peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/12/2019 7:42:00 PM
Your poem reflects pensive and melancholy musing, Vincent. A deep write beautifully expressed. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/12/2019 10:51:00 PM
Thank you for the comment!
Date: 5/12/2019 8:25:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Vincent.
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/12/2019 12:18:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/12/2019 8:10:00 AM
External peace not always possible. Internal peace is achievable when we trust in a higher power
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/12/2019 12:18:00 PM
I believe in that too! Thank you for the comment!
Date: 4/30/2019 7:33:00 PM
Peace is what we all strive for Vincent, in our lives and for the world, I hope your wish comes true...well done
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/1/2019 12:18:00 AM
This is so true. Thank you so much for the comment.
Date: 4/30/2019 9:08:00 AM
Chilling and melancholy. So much conveyed in so few words. Welcome to PoetrySoup. May your restless heart find the peace you long for. Beautiful poem.
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 4/30/2019 9:17:00 AM
You're so sweet. Thank you so much for the comment. :)