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They say I'm too young, To wish to turn blue today, I really want peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/2/2019 7:47:00 AM
It’s good to give peace a chance. ;0)
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 7/3/2019 6:55:00 AM
Indeed! Thank you for reading my poems! :)
Date: 6/14/2019 11:35:00 PM
Really great haiku here :) thanks for sharing..~JWE
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 6/20/2019 8:11:00 AM
Hey there! Thank you so much! :)
Date: 6/5/2019 2:17:00 PM
Nice piece your first poem to soup, well penned.
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 6/6/2019 2:32:00 AM
I think it's a fitting poem to begin here. This one talks about where I am and I want to look back in the future when I will say, "Oh this is where I used to be." and fully assess on my being. Thank you so much! :)
Date: 5/12/2019 7:42:00 PM
Your poem reflects pensive and melancholy musing, Vincent. A deep write beautifully expressed. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/12/2019 10:51:00 PM
Thank you for the comment!
Date: 5/12/2019 8:25:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Vincent.
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/12/2019 12:18:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/30/2019 9:08:00 AM
Chilling and melancholy. So much conveyed in so few words. Welcome to PoetrySoup. May your restless heart find the peace you long for. Beautiful poem.
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 4/30/2019 9:17:00 AM
You're so sweet. Thank you so much for the comment. :)