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I wish I was a better man It's what you deserve I promise you the world And I never keep my word If I was a better man I'd never be untrue But you don't even know Half the lies I've told you If I was a better man I'd never leave you alone Stop drinking with my friends And stay with you at home If I was a better man I'd never raise my voice Stop smoking so much weed Make you my drug of choice If I was a better man I'd say "Tonight's your night" Kiss and lick your body Till the early morning light If I was a better man I'd make your dreams come true Bring you breakfast in bed Do the dishes when your through But when I hold you in my arms And you say you understand "I love you just the way you are" You make me a better man
Author's Note: Judy Dunbar did her own version of Better Man. Check it out, won't you?

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Date: 4/15/2019 8:32:00 AM
An excellent take on the title Hon. Everybody needs someone to make them a better person. You're mine :)
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Date: 4/15/2019 8:03:00 PM
Tonight's YOUR night babe.