Beauiul Carrie Trees

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Beautiful Carrie Trees

Oh, how I love it, love it all
Oh, yes I do with all my heart
Everything is so wonderful
How do those trees grow oh so tall?
Those Carrie trees are really cool
They are a lovely piece of art
 Oh lord,  they are so beautiful
Of nature they’re a lovely part

I walk on through these Carie trees
As Kookaburrra He does laugh
The sun shines down I look with glee
Such wonder in this place, I see
Those big strong trees, here next to me
I will say this on their behalf
How wonderful these trees they be
As kookaburra he does laugh

4 February 2019

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2019 6:36:00 AM

I saw a Kookaburra once in a zoo. He was not making a sound so I missed the wonder of his/her call. I guess he wasn't very happy being in a cage all by himself. I enjoyed reading your work. I need look up Kookaburra and see if they have a recording on a live one to see what call goes with the bird. Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats. Sara

sidney dugan
Date: 2/5/2019 5:10:00 PM

Hi Sarah. so nice to see you on my page. These birds com over our house. I love their laughing cries. They are a relative to the kingfisher. Thank you for your kind words, my friend....Peter

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/5/2019 3:37:00 AM

Lovely poem full of happiness.

sidney dugan
Date: 2/5/2019 5:06:00 PM

Thank you so much Victor. I appreciate your kind comments, My friend....Peter

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/4/2019 6:51:00 PM

Those carie trees are a work of art, and I wish I had one. I doubt I could make one grow in Kansas, cut I am going to go somewhere on the internet and listen to the sound of a kookaburra, if it kills me. I always think I will, and this time I am going to. You make it lovely!

sidney dugan
Date: 2/4/2019 7:05:00 PM

Hi Caren, How I do adore trees, when I go along in the car I cannot help take my eyes off of the different types. There is nothing quite as nice as hearing those kookaburras giving out their wonderful calls. Then you have the black cockatoos, And the corellas. all of them so loud. Thank yiu for your kind comments, my friend....Peter

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2019 5:12:00 PM

CUte set. I love that last line but I think you needed to stick it in line two as well!! I would dearly love to see this tree and hear the kookaburra laugh!

sidney dugan
Date: 2/4/2019 6:08:00 PM

Hi Andrea. I thank you for that Tip. I changed it and I like it better that way. Thank you for the comments, and for your help. You are appreciated, my friend....Peter