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I post on the Soup for all to see and am no angel nor claim to be. I am kind and all that but carry a big bat... so beware how you remember me! February 2016 For the Sensitive Community contest.

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/9/2018 1:35:00 PM

You're no a bully, not at all a sissy; like this a whole lot, Keith! ;)

FJ Thomas

Date: 3/29/2018 5:14:00 PM

BAM! This I like Keith ;•}

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/29/2018 12:59:00 PM

Really good. Enjoyed each line, Keith. Best wishes n Blessings

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/25/2018 2:51:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2016 10:41:00 AM

AWESOME limerick, Keith. I have to admit I don't know the gangster in your picture here. Great Al Capone picture. Sammy is my nephew, I like to use his name in some of my limericks. I guess I just love the name!! His real name is Samuel Clemens and he is a descendant of that famous one !

JAN ALLISON

Date: 3/22/2016 4:33:00 PM

had to drop by and read this again lol:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2016 12:42:00 AM

Keith, :) Congratulations on your awesome Sensitive community Limerick win. --Love Linda--

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/16/2016 2:02:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome win Keith..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2016 3:56:00 PM

Awesome way to do your limerick, Keith. Congrats for your win.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/15/2016 6:47:00 AM

Hahaha. A nice one. Congrats for your placement Keith!!! ;-)

JAN ALLISON

Date: 3/14/2016 2:49:00 PM

great rhyme and humour Keith many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

SKAT A

Date: 3/14/2016 10:31:00 AM

Keith, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick win. Stop by my latest blog and drop a smile ;-) Celebrate and enjoy my winning list. **SKAT LOVE**

nette onclaud

Date: 3/3/2016 2:44:00 PM

so funny.. now what do i do with my gas pain, keith.. huggs

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/27/2016 12:00:00 PM

Lol : )Very sweet limerick..that goes Wuff Baw WoW!

ANTHONY MARK

Date: 2/25/2016 9:00:00 PM

Ok last go at this....lol.. WHEN THE WOLVES DID SURROUND........... HE WAS THE KIND OF HOUND................6 syllables each...rolls well,tempo correct meter effect....why aren't others pointing this out.....???, I feel like he freakin Poetry Police...lol....I'm well thanks

Carlene Simpson

Date: 2/25/2016 8:24:00 AM

Really good Keith....at least your not afraid to tell it like it is!!!

ANTHONY MARK

Date: 2/25/2016 2:29:00 AM

Woof throws line 3 ? try : ' i`m, the kinda ma...... when sh#t hits the fan hope this helps ya tempo and meter :)

Tim Smith

Date: 2/24/2016 10:12:00 PM

I wrote another but can't post it...lol

Tim Smith

Date: 2/24/2016 9:17:00 PM

his bark was bigger than his bite....but the ladies still backed with fright...til they saw his bald head...and wooed him to bed...satisfied they smiled with delight