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  I post on the Soup for all to see
  And am no angel nor claim to be.
    I am kind and all that
      But carry a big bat...
So beware how you remember me!


            February 2016

 For the Sensitive Community contest.
                



Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/9/2018 1:35:00 PM
You're no a bully, not at all a sissy; like this a whole lot, Keith! ;)
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Date: 3/29/2018 5:14:00 PM
BAM! This I like Keith ;•}
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Date: 3/29/2018 12:59:00 PM
Really good. Enjoyed each line, Keith. Best wishes n Blessings
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Date: 3/25/2018 2:51:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. Sara
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Date: 4/17/2016 10:41:00 AM
AWESOME limerick, Keith. I have to admit I don't know the gangster in your picture here. Great Al Capone picture. Sammy is my nephew, I like to use his name in some of my limericks. I guess I just love the name!! His real name is Samuel Clemens and he is a descendant of that famous one !
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Date: 3/22/2016 4:33:00 PM
had to drop by and read this again lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/20/2016 12:42:00 AM
Keith, :) Congratulations on your awesome Sensitive community Limerick win. --Love Linda--
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Date: 3/16/2016 2:02:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win Keith..
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Date: 3/15/2016 3:56:00 PM
Awesome way to do your limerick, Keith. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 3/15/2016 6:47:00 AM
Hahaha. A nice one. Congrats for your placement Keith!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/14/2016 2:49:00 PM
great rhyme and humour Keith many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/14/2016 10:31:00 AM
Keith, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick win. Stop by my latest blog and drop a smile ;-) Celebrate and enjoy my winning list. **SKAT LOVE**
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Date: 3/5/2016 5:38:00 AM
Tommy, I have been known to bite the odd wolf, especially when they threaten my flock! Cheers for stopping by.
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Date: 3/3/2016 2:44:00 PM
so funny.. now what do i do with my gas pain, keith.. huggs
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 3/3/2016 4:45:00 PM
Hi there Nette. Woof! Nice to hear from ya.
Date: 2/27/2016 12:00:00 PM
Lol : )Very sweet limerick..that goes Wuff Baw WoW!
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/27/2016 5:04:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine. Have a wonderful day.
Date: 2/25/2016 9:00:00 PM
Ok last go at this....lol.. WHEN THE WOLVES DID SURROUND........... HE WAS THE KIND OF HOUND................6 syllables each...rolls well,tempo correct meter effect....why aren't others pointing this out.....???, I feel like he freakin Poetry Police...lol....I'm well thanks
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/25/2016 9:17:00 PM
Cheers for that Constable Mark! For a moment there I thought I was gonna get dragged off to Scotland Yard for impersonating a poet! Thanks for the visit.
Date: 2/25/2016 8:24:00 AM
Really good Keith....at least your not afraid to tell it like it is!!!
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/25/2016 8:09:00 PM
Lovely to hear from you, Carlene. I prefer to be out in the open that lurking in the shadows. Take care.
Date: 2/25/2016 2:29:00 AM
Woof throws line 3 ? try : ' i`m, the kinda ma...... when sh#t hits the fan hope this helps ya tempo and meter :)
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/25/2016 4:12:00 AM
Nice to hear from ya "Mark". Thanks for the tip - that's what true collaborative Soupers do. Hope all is well. I'll look at it again but my care factor and expectations aren't high in the contest.
Date: 2/24/2016 10:12:00 PM
I wrote another but can't post it...lol
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/24/2016 10:39:00 PM
Sure you can! Fortune favours the brave!
Date: 2/24/2016 9:17:00 PM
his bark was bigger than his bite....but the ladies still backed with fright...til they saw his bald head...and wooed him to bed...satisfied they smiled with delight
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/24/2016 10:09:00 PM
I wish! How are ya, Tim? Appreciate you stopping by.