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Bang! It echoes in his mind
That's where this Hell trip started
Bang! The sound to end her life 
And leave him broken hearted

Bang! The slamming of the door 
As she had run for cover
Bang! The last sound ever heard 
By her now stone cold lover

Bang! As he kicked down the door
He knew where he would find her
Bang! She slammed into the wall 
With no escape behind her

Bang! He pulled the trigger and 
Her body began falling
Bang! The phone crashed to the floor
The police, she had been calling

Bang! The front door crashing in
Hands grabbing him, restraining
Bang! The sound of his cell door
His anger now was waning

Bang! His mind at last gives out
It's tortured by the banging
Bang! His cell door is thrown wide
Inside they find him hanging

AN - John Crowe and I chose Bang! as a one word title and had 20 minutes to write a poem. Please take a look at John's version:)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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