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As I Looked Ino Your Blue Eyes

As I Looked Into Your Blue Eyes

As I did look into your deep blue eyes
They sparkled at me like the stars above
I felt something within me did arise
As the sun did shine on this day of love

They sparkled at me like the stars above
Your tenderness it seeped into my heart
As sun did shine upon the day of love
It seemed you were a priceless piece of art

Your tenderness it seeped into my heart
You filled me with the sweetest joy on Earth
It seemed you were a priceless piece of art
To me my darling you have so much worth

You filled me with the sweetest joy on Earth
As sun shone down and filled your hair with light
To me my darling you had so much worth
I loved it as the sun did shine so bright

As sun shone down and filled your hair with light
It seemed to me this world belonged to me
Cause everything it touched me made me bright
I felt within me all your mystery

It seemed to me this world belonged to me
As I did melt into your sweet blue eyes
I felt within me all your mystery
My love for you it reached unto the skies

As I did melt into your sweet blue eyes
I knew I’d love you till forever more
My love for you it reached unto the sky
You’ll always be the girl that I adore

20 December 2018

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Date: 12/20/2018 3:19:00 PM
Beautiful flow and rhythm..an excellent romantic write, Sidney.
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sidney dugan
Date: 12/20/2018 4:40:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay for your nice comments. They are always appreciated, my friend Have a great holiday...Peter
Date: 12/20/2018 2:20:00 PM
Hello Sidney,you wrote this poem as a Pantoum,I read this as a love poem. Nice to meet you. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. Have A NICE DAY MY FRIEND.
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sidney dugan
Date: 12/20/2018 4:42:00 PM
Hi Darlene. you know what they say about a rose by any other name. Thank you so much for your kind comments, my friend. Have a great Christmas....Peter
Date: 12/20/2018 6:03:00 AM
Ahh!! How romantic. Way to go. These Pantoums are not so easy to write but this one flows really well. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 12/20/2018 4:46:00 PM
Hi Sara, I can't say I like writing styles much. I much prefer my flow and rhyme poems. The Pantoum is quite a nice style though. Thank you for your kind comments, my friend Have a lovely Christmas....Peter