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An Idyllic Life

In a pastoral place
Surrounded by a picturesque view
Far away to an unspoiled place;
I am peaceful,
Surely a charming life shall follow
With a comfortable state of mind,
Loving the heavenly atmosphere,
Ideally and pleasing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/10/2019 12:00:00 PM
Pretty poem with a peaceful image, though I wonder if ideally should be ideal
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Son of Spock
Date: 12/10/2019 12:15:00 PM
Pleasing is an adjective and so is ideal, hence a coherent description of the heavenly atmosphere referenced. Ideally is an adverb and just doesn't fit here. I don't know who grammarly is but they need to brush up a bit
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Bobbie Burns
Date: 12/10/2019 12:07:00 PM
According to Grammarly ideally is right. Probably ideal is good too.