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POTD 28th August 2018

All In All, True Magnificent Treasures Given

Luscious the fruits, beautiful under moonlit beams
firmly planted roots, outstandingly hot, lush-sent dreams
all in all, glorified visions, heavenly sent
treasured deeply with rapture stored, sweet love-nights spent.

Tender kissing bites, honeyed dessert offered free
wonderful the flights, through blossoming forests of trees
all in all, miracles were given, lost soul found
in resplendent nights, covering soft virgin grounds!

Gold fairy dusted, jeweled eyes sending bright smiles
each promise trusted, an angel with no dark wiles
all in all, true magnificent treasures given
gracefully sent, in true-deep bliss, purely driven.

Beneath plum skies starlight glistening in her eyes
I see all I desire, and I do fantasize -
looking into her goddess blues, crystal gazing;
of our wild delight to be forever blazing.

In Eden’s solitude we dance to soft sighs of
waltzing wind-songs’ stirring verses promising love
with lilting whispered melodies so inspiring
my appetite for her wanton and untiring.

Ancient woodland’s moon casts smitten luminescence 
breathtaking in beauty she outshines its presence
ecstasy flows an intoxicating river
inebriating essence in love’s deliver.

Your vivacious beauty enhanced by golden rays
illuminating your grace with a loving gaze
with ardent reflection of my phantom desire
to allow the pledge of love finally transpire.

Two common souls released from infernal abyss
to engage a rendezvous with heavenly bliss.
Together our spirits soar to realms of delight,
two lost souls united in the fading twilight.

With a chapter closing in reverie’s accord
we share a secret paradise of love’s award.
All in all, wondrous senses of passion recall,
from heart to soul we reminisce, as love is all.


A collaboration: Robert J. Lindley, Susan Ashley and Teppo Gren

August 22, 2018


Poet's note: I am once again truly honored to compose in collaboration with two wonderful friends and talented poets, Susan Ashley and Robert Lindley. The creative poetry that comes from deep within your hearts, Susan and Robert, is so very inspiring. Thank you for inviting me to participate in this wonderful creation to express the depths of love and emotion.

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Date: 11/29/2018 3:40:00 PM
Collaborators supreme you three, superb penning indeed, keep penning away!
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Date: 11/15/2018 12:11:00 AM
Collaborate on! You three are on first, far as I can tell. Loved the read. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 10/6/2018 11:01:00 AM
Hi Teppo, another excellent write from three true poets who shine in each poetic work written. You each give such poetic grace to this piece. I feel such peace within as I read through poetic grace. This is a true jewel in your poetic crowns. Just excellent my friend, just excellent. Your pens shall ever run gold. This one has to be a fave. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 10/2/2018 4:55:00 PM
Amazing poetry, this collab is truly a work of art.
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Date: 9/29/2018 5:06:00 AM
Good Morning Teppo. I'm sorry so much time has passed since I've visited. Congratulations to you and to the other writers as well. What a wonderful collaboration on all your parts. As the reader reads he knows he is seeing and hearing beauty and poetry. I very much enjoyed the title as well. Have a wonderful morning. May this day find you well.
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Date: 9/28/2018 3:34:00 PM
The imagry is amazing! I was totally taken to another place. Thank you for that.
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Date: 9/24/2018 2:04:00 PM
Ah TJ this truly poetry at it's finest! The three of of you are as always marvelous as ever!;)Had to co d back to read again and second time around is even better! ;) Hugs Brenda
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Date: 9/15/2018 6:22:00 PM
You two collaborate so beautifully together Teppo. Very engaging! Congratulations to you both! : )
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Date: 9/14/2018 10:45:00 AM
Beautiful, just beautiful, Teppo Congratulations~Warren
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Date: 9/13/2018 1:34:00 AM
Excellent and a wonderful collaboration by three of you all. Its marvelous imagery. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 9/10/2018 12:02:00 PM
Wow... So beautiful.. i loved it... Great flow and lovely imagery.... Wonderful collaboration...Congratulations....
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Date: 9/9/2018 11:52:00 AM
Came looking for a new write but still no! But this is just as lovely read twice!;) Hugs Brenda
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Date: 9/7/2018 4:50:00 PM
Hello T.J. A wonderful collaborative effort here by you, Susan, and Robert. The beauty, power, and depth of are absolutely reflective of "true magnificent treasures given." Metaphors and captivating imagery abound in this truly outstanding Rhyme!! Best Kudos to You All!! A FAVE!! Cheers, Gary
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Date: 9/7/2018 7:18:00 AM
Indeed! Love is all! Great write, Teppo; you say it so beautifully.
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Date: 9/5/2018 6:39:00 PM
G'day Teppo … Crikey! What a great blend of poetic lines of intertwined love and fantasy. A wonderful combined effort - congratulations to all three - Lindsay
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Date: 9/5/2018 7:30:00 AM
Well done all three of you! Gorgeous imagery! Congrats on POTW, an excellent choice.
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Date: 9/4/2018 7:48:00 PM
You are truly blessed... for your companions in poetry blend perfectly...uniting as one with you...A lovely write till the end and beyond...All the best Teppo
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Date: 9/5/2018 1:17:00 AM
Thank you very much, Arturo. T.J
Date: 9/4/2018 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on POTW! What a superb collaboration by three of our most gifted poets! Just a pleasure to read! Well done, Poets! Hugs and love. Pandita
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Date: 9/5/2018 1:10:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind and wonderful comments, Pandita. Love and hugs. T.J
Date: 9/2/2018 3:57:00 PM
This is more then just a mere chapter this is a story of love and fantasy, What a beautiful delicate mix, I love it. Teppo, your amazing,
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Date: 9/5/2018 1:10:00 AM
Thank you very much for your lovely comments, Pixie. T.J
Date: 9/1/2018 8:43:00 AM
Indeed a “Gold fairy dusted, jeweled eyes sending bright smiles” delight! Wonderful collaboration!
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Date: 9/5/2018 1:04:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim. Your visits and comments are always welcome and much appreciated. T.J
Date: 9/1/2018 2:37:00 AM
wow that's hot and very well penned. Wonderful joint effort - thoroughly enjoyed.
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Date: 9/5/2018 1:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Virginia. Appreciated. T.J
Date: 8/31/2018 3:24:00 PM
gosh you three together are a WONDER!! how do you all find the time to create such beautiful poetry together?
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Date: 9/5/2018 1:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea. The time difference brings its own challenge to writing in collab. T.J
Date: 8/31/2018 7:53:00 AM
Wow, what an epic collaboration. Congrats to all on POTD!
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Date: 9/5/2018 1:02:00 AM
Thank you very much, Richard. T.J
Date: 8/31/2018 3:08:00 AM
You three are flawless together, three minds merging together bringing the reader brilliant imagery, romance and food for the Soul type poetry. Bravo I am in awe of you three collaborators, true masters of PS.Love and hugs Teppo,Susan and Robert a fave for me....Maria
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Date: 8/31/2018 4:27:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words, dear Maria. Love and hugs. T.J
Date: 8/30/2018 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations to all three amazing poets on achieving POTD with your beautifully written poem.
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Date: 8/31/2018 4:25:00 AM
Thank you very much for the congrats, Roy. T.J
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