afternoon rain

The afternoon rain, Washes my face full of pain, Like the hands of God.

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Date: 7/2/2019 9:00:00 AM

In a wY it is His hand.

Vincent Salvosa
Date: 7/3/2019 8:01:00 AM

I like to think in that way every time it rains! :)

Date: 6/12/2019 10:00:00 AM

Quality of words, pressed together in a tight box, that spans the universe. I love it. Ty. :) Ann

Vincent Salvosa
Date: 6/12/2019 8:57:00 PM

Thank you so much! :)

Date: 5/12/2019 8:27:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Vincent.

Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/12/2019 12:20:00 PM

Thank you for commenting! :)

Date: 5/8/2019 7:43:00 AM

Ooohh, love this one! Fave!

Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/8/2019 7:54:00 AM

Hey thank you for commenting! This one just came to me very fast!

Date: 5/2/2019 3:45:00 AM

Blessed rain, relief from the Divine, washing your tears away... salute alkas.

Vincent Salvosa
Date: 5/2/2019 5:03:00 AM

Thank you for the comment! :)