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A torrential rain Changes not pattern of a leaf Wise words-moves not a thief. A gusty gale Cannot wipe away a weed Charity-does not erase bad deed. Even though pleasant to hear A cuckoo sings when Nature is clear So, should an advice -be from one to other. When the spoken words are not taken Advice becomes just vice Silence seems wise choice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/20/2016 10:04:00 PM
thriveni c.mysore, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2015 3:03:00 PM
T C M, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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