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A Brand new day

A new day needs to be here
This world, it has to change
Everything has gone too far
It is time to rearrange
We all should look around us
And see what’s going on
There’s so much evil in this world
And we must make this gone

Sure, and steady we must go
Let the first thought touch our minds
Always be a good example
Don’t be the foolish kind
So, many folk are brainwashed
And fail to see what’s true
We all must tell them gently
Just what we all must do

We must bring love into our world
And let the people see
Without this love to bring you joy
In more trouble we will be
Positive intention
Will help us on the way
We must look at what is wrong
And bring in a brand new day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/6/2019 4:47:00 AM
What you wrote is very important. I believe the time is nearing when things will change.
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Date: 2/6/2019 5:00:00 PM
Me too Victor, we really need to stop all the nonsense that represents our world today, I thank you my friend for your kind words....Peter
Date: 2/6/2019 2:18:00 AM
Great write Peter, mankind has certainly took a wrong turn, we need to start again and hopefully learn from past mistakes. Tom.
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sidney dugan
Date: 2/6/2019 5:02:00 PM
So true TOM, AND WE ARE MOVING BACK MORE EACH DAY. wE CAN ONLY HOPE FOR THE FUTURE. I THANK YOU AGAIN FOR YOUR KIND COMMENTS....pETER