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Premium Member David Bowie in the Wild West

rootin'-tootin' misinformed opinions
a game of risk at an overflowing cafe
in t-shirts, shorts and straws all over the floor
napkins neglected and looking like bankruptcy on stilts 

i feel like a torn out page of my own sulwicket
or rather the shade outside, with its erroneous 
shaped patches on the cobblestones 
and non-fiction that isn't getting us anywhere

tennis court blues and the man waving from
another court, who believes he knows us,
but actually doesn't, but i return the wave
at break point

and a student has written a creative piece
set in the wild west with a character called
David Bowie, who comes in two-thirds of the
way through the yarn

about to duel in the town's empty and only crossroads.
"ch-ch-ch-ch-changes!' PEW PEW PEW  

get kettle on

Assassin

Remember times when you spoke of “him” or “her”
Malice was in your words – perhaps a nasty slur.

You spoke behind their backs, in gossip you engaged
Things they did - or said - that had you so enraged.

Can you see the Assassin you became?
Your spoken words were NOT just a thoughtless game

Others to whom you speak repeat your nasty words
Once, then twice, and eventually into thirds

‘Tis not the person of whom you speak who has the fault, you see
But YOU (and others) who repeat phrases carelessly

There is a Day of Reckoning, and ‘tis you who will regret
Your words of assassination on others you beget

The nasty words you spoke with great malice and intent
Will return to you ten fold – and from God they will be sent.

‘Tis HE that you must face, upon your Judgment Day
I hope that I am there to hear what defense you think will pay

For all the vicious words you’ve said within your Life’s foray
And the Character Assassin that you’ve become today.

Premium Member The Stoner

I was sitting on the corner, stoned 
When out of the blue, my dead aunt phoned 
How could this be, she rests in peace 
Right beside my loving niece
 
I answered the phone, and my auntie said 
"I know you think that I am dead"  
"I'm alive"- my auntie moaned 
Or- could it be that you're just- "Stoned" by Charles Messina 

Niece Alice bakes brownies with magic herbs                        
She uses rich chocolate, and flour, two thirds
Before Auntie June gets out of bed                                             
Alice feeds the cat and minds his head                                                                       

She shared a snack and laugh with you
And now you’re happy and Auntie June is too
When auntie asks why your eyes grow and grow
You say “Go ask Alice, I think she’ll know”


Saturday Trio

Crossing The Line


Time
is a circle
Unbroken
ordained

Inside
or out
Your destiny
— claimed

***

When The Music’s Over

Faithful
to his demons
Jim walked the Rues
 
Paris
alluring
deception its truth

Consumed
by a fantasy
where darkness can hide

Alone
in the travesty
the drugs — and the lies

***

One Chance

Time waits
for no one
holding their breath

Hearts beat 
in sequence
numbered till death

One chance
is given
no seconds or thirds

Fate
the addiction
— shaken not stirred

(Dreamsleep: May, 2026)

Premium Member Aesthetic - A Romantic Allusion to JW Waterhouse

You turned on to your left side
There painted before me was your contour,
the resplendent lines of an hourglass

The rule of thirds composing the view
Your thick raven hair against the 
pale linens in the morning twilight. 
Strong movement from the back of your arm 
Flowing, going down to the palm 
and climaxing at the finger tips
With an aura of delicate benevolence 

There was a single spaghetti strap laying lazily, 
aimlessly over your olive skin, pretending to support 
one of your breasts, Invisible to me
I wanted to run my finger along it but did not

The whole scene fittingly arranged
As if a great work was about to be born
A pose struck like a Waterhouse goddess
I wish I was he lying in this bed

This view has been within the artist scope 
since the dawn of aesthetic sight
Yet it is to this beholder of beauty
as belonging to the one to whom I retreat
that becomes this morning's single tear

Let my feelings for you in this moment 
be rendered upon this canvas
in the pensive hues and lines of my love 
Let it be duly hung In the Museum of Reverie
from this day until there are no more lovers

Premium Member Fragile

A lawn full of weeds a mouth full of words,
clean them up leave behind the essential.
Floating through the air flying whirlybirds, 
fragile can still gain control of that ball.
It’s okay when they’re broken in to thirds,
at times things need to stay confidential. 
Fine image that conveys it’s kept after,  
that eloquence was built to protect her.


Faith whispers

My faith whispers bright,
Guided by the light,
God magnifies sousl,
Fills doubts and holes,
Seamless happy joy,
For each gal and boy,
Faithful do throng,
Hope lingers long,
Creed of Holy words,
Trinity in thirds,
Ancient, mystic, bright
Faith drawing me to light.

Premium Member December Days - West Indian Style

Dusting, as if Second Advent is Christmas Day
Entertaining, from abundance or for mere lack
Cooking with the crockery, banging out souffles
Eating thirds, doubling waistlines, seasonal pounds pack
Merry-making, sozzled so in the festive mood
Baking anything that has a beat, even snails
Expending on material goods till it's rude
Receiving presents, swapping cards and vintage tales

Where Are You Now, Gloria Dubbins?

Gloria Dubbins - not much of a name,
but trust me on my judgment, gentle reader;
in terms of Beauty, she was Hall of Fame.

We’re talking – let’s see – nineteen seventy-two,
but I’m the keeper of the Gloria Flame,
and still to me she’s better, and more true,

than all your Taylor Swifts or Amber Heards.
She did the things that gorgeous women do -
in essence, nothing. Gloria had no words.

Intelligence?  Commitment?  Are you kidding?
For babes, that stuff is strictly for the birds.
She sat immobile and observed the bidding.

I’ll tell you this, but won’t apportion blame.
You, too, would be as motionless as cedar
if you’d been dealt her hand, to play The Game.

She’s not the kind you wound up talking to.
Her presence smote you with a sort of shame:
she struck you dumb: the words would not come through.

And Gloria didn’t gravitate to herds.
Perforce, she rowed her own sublime canoe.
Her beauty left her friendless, like the Kurds.

What was her view of Comus?  Little Gidding?
I don’t have – no, I never had – a clue.
Enigma fits her.  Easily two-thirds
of all the girls acknowledged her as leader,
but oddly she was Nothing Like A Dame.

Russell Brand, Ayn Rand and Ray Milland Walk into a Bar

So: thinker, “personality” and actor
	are looking for a drink.
If two of them are trailers, one’s a tractor.
“Nice counter-top. Real zinc?”

“Don’t ask them stuff. They memorise words
	of better men, to spout ’em!”
“And his type feels the need to gather herds
	of sycophants about ’em.”

“There’s zinc in every human enzyme. Fact.”
	“An enzyme? Qu’est-ce que c’est?”
“A catalyst which helps your gut react
	a thousand times a day.” 

Creators are the only ones who matter,
	just them and only them.
Who grows, can know: who knows can grow (and scatter):
	the human apothegm.

“The path from easy living?  Slow decline
	to reach death valley days.”
“Misfortunes? They’re all relative, and mine
	are slight. I’m not from Grays!”

Who hasn’t done his share of Boogie Nights?
	All wassail hours are zeros.
Two-thirds of humankind are parasites:
	where should we look for heroes?

We have a thing now, called celebrity
	that’s not the same as fame:
whatever ape forsakes the tree
	can make himself a name.

The world, for entertainment, craves a schism
	(Max Baer against Joe Louis):
but who foresaw the Queen of Capitalism
	would be a Russian Jewess?

Premium Member Holocaust remembrance day

27 January is known as holocaust Liberation day
The liberation of the Auschwitz concentration camp 
Systematic extermination  of jews what can i say
The NAZI regime laying down its stamp

These awful acts carried out around Europe
People being murdered because of religion
No proper food starved of syrup
Living in camps like hells kitchen

6 million Jews exterminated
Two thirds of Europe's Jewish population
The smell of death permeated
It needs to remain in education

Why were the Jewish persecuted
It dates back as far as roman times
The warped idea of man concluded
The Jewish were alleged to commit crimes

The main instigator for this despicable act
The Final solution  incitement off genocide
Was Adolf Hitler this is a fact 
With his tiny mustache and eyes opened wide

The evil within him was totally absorbed
He compared the Jews to being germs
He wrote main kamph  for the record
Antisemitism he took by the horns

Although illegal and somewhat outrageous
Hitler didn't invent antisemitism
Jewish persecution was around in the middle ages
This would now been known as racism

Long Man

I can’t fit inside this lock
I can’t fit inside this sock 
This hole is not meant for me
Body stretching out from me
Out of sync 
Misshapen link
Wash the ink out in the sink
You went day and I went night
I went left and you went right
And everything just looks so wrong
I don’t understand this song 
I am way beyond repair
My liver’s pulling at my hair
My neck is biting at my tongue
My leg is choking out my lung
My hands are fighting with my heart
My pieces mixing with my parts
I’m a jumble mumbled mess
An uneducated guess
I went no and you went yes
You went more and I went less
All tied up and all stretched out
I got lupus I got gout
I don’t fit into this mold
I’m too hot and I’m too cold
I’m lopsided and askew
You went red and I went blue
I went one and you went two
And I don’t know what I should do
Fool me once and fool me thrice
But now I’m chewing on the dice
Rattle brains and saddle lice
Grip my shoulder in a vice
Two thirds left and halfway done
Three makes ten and nine makes one
Now you’ve got me all confused
Now I can’t fit in these shoes
I think that I went too long
I think that I went too long

Premium Member Pansy

When a seedling, handsome wind caught my eye
and together we flew with the birds
Then, suddenly, I tumbled from the sky
found myself in a land of rows in thirds.

Other seedlings lived there and asked my name
Bashfully, I answered, "I don't know it!”
Then you're undoubtedly a weed—for shame!
I just knew I would never outgrow it

one day, wearing silk petals, I awoke
like magic,, I was lovely. quite fancy
The queen I became by masterful stroke
and I'm now known by the name of Pansy

First Place!

Premium Member It's Here--Autumn

good-bye 
summer

see you
next year

your turn
autumn

bring your
cool breeze

gleaming
light frost

do your
magic

changing 
leaves from

green to
golden

red and
purple

see them
cascade

leaving 
bare limbs~~

mums and
pumpkins

brighten
porches

kids in
costumes

trick or
treating

special
Thursday

when we 
gather

speak of
blessings

feast on
turkey

autumn 
now is

two-thirds
over

soon we
will be 

singing 
carols

Premium Member Sacrifice

Swirling, pulsing, and throbbing through air
came a cloud, not quite black, above my bed, 
not closing my eyes and watching in fear, 
Death would be easy but the cloud was my dread.

Looking closer, I viewed a darkening black spot
two thirds of the way down the visage's form.
It grew, spun, shrunk as though it were hot.
My head seemed electric as though in a storm.

I jumped from the bed wanting a fight.
The cloud backed away, I thought setting me free.
I grabbed at its shoulders holding on tight,
Saying Death take no one, but take only me.

I kicked the spot with best martial art, 
thus causing the form to fold with a cry.
We tumbled to hell, there never to part.
I sacrificed life, and in hell I would die.

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