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Premium Member SUR REALITY

SUR REALITY 
in a dream
  glaring 
 passion
intangible thrills

 this symphony
   cannot last

as
 if
 in a dream 

night
as far 
as the eye
 can see 

then
alone 
 wretched 
exaggerated 
  proportions 

 develop

age
 or 
decay
 we 
cannot judge

contemporary 
to the core 
we
search
 for conception.

Pate A Choux part 2 Sur la touche

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Dancing in Boulogne-Sur-Mer

Dancing in Boulogne-Sur-Mer


I was dancing in Boulogne-Sur-Mer 
when a young woman stopped me, 
and said, “Madame, you are superbe.”
She told me twice, Madame you are superbe


But I didn’t feel superb.
Hadn’t for a long time, if ever at all. 
How is superb supposed to feel
when you're dancing in Boulogne-Sur-Mer?


Later I visited my doctor to 
ask if there was anything she could give for
treatment of the human condition; explain the
 woman had told me I was superbe. 


The doctor laughed, and said 
there was nothing for it I could take, 
apart from anti-depressants,
if you're depressed, are you, not superb?


She asked if I needed to take a break. Shall I sign you off, she said?
Maybe some time spent, alone in bed?
No, I said. She suggested I chose values, 
acceptance, rebellion, indifference or hope.


I went away, bemused
realising there is no choice 
to be made, you need all values
in your armour to face despair
when you’re dancing in Boulogne Sur mer.


Premium Member Sur Real Surveyed

to depict

      what we can
see
    within

which is
never revealed
                      aloud

meta
       invisible

landscapes of the
mind
of 
        left    field

the banal
absurd
                yet
deadpan

              &     real

             clashing
             symbols

appear
          in 
              the eye
           
outside
     the box
               
imagery
is
                  all

riddles

  in
    
        shadows

make
     of it


wat
      u
           wil

Sur Ces Lignes

Ode to them
        those that love 
        Ode to those
        who stands opposed
        Until then
        one should wonder
         chance what we
         have proposed
         so that we
         might sing before those
         sort each word
         from it's complication
         change the tunes
         to compliment those
         some might seek
          to take us asunder
          some might seek to
          stand and applaud
          some may stand
          to mend there
          broken hearts
          some may come to
          turn up there nose
          word the storied blunders
          that perfection might reveal

Sur Ces Lignes

Her assignment was to
create a balsamic? Olive oil glaze
for green onions , roasted yellow pepper, cucumber
to accompany a Sour crème and Cheddar Duchess potato
and a Medium Rare Prime Rib
with a tangy creamy herb gravy.
and a hazelnut Tart
with Cream Pastry and Mango
with a Sweet White Muscat de Frontignan wine

springform Pans
Flute Glasses
Pastry bags
whisks
heavy cream

Who sweetens these nights
might those labor that
there perfections
will make an 
evening that much more specail..
" The Fuge Compromist"
   "Wet the Palette "


Premium Member The Bridge Sur Scene

Monet's brush strokes blend to show Argenteuil and Seine.
Monet, Renoir prized evoking faded light and scene
Told to Lilla Cabot, US artist "painting means slight around you,"
Frame a blue sib, a rose oblong, a fair line, and paint it as you view.




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Written: February 03, 2022

Premium Member Oh Redon Before Sur Realtime

symbolic 
     surreal 
       introspections
 inspirations
        in the complex
radiant 
poetic pastel
           peinture  contemplative 

juxtapositions
     deep imaginings 
as tonal treats
            in the eye

 unique 
 dreamlike
         symbolistique

Premium Member Sur Prize

I would like to win
Is it a mortal sin
To want to wear a winners grin?

Premium Member Sur-Reality

11
So mom said
You call that
Head normal
Sur-reality
Surrounds
In slight
Sounds foot
Crushes leaf
And my feet I leave


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Une Barque Sur L'Ocean

The sparkling melody mirrors the waves
Of the peaceful Aegean Sea.
With notes floating to my rousing mind,
Sailing boats is all I see. 

With winds flowing, boats sail forward
Towards cliffs of jagged rock,
From the town on the bluff I watch
Boats drift towards the dock.

That's the scene I always see
Hearing Ravel’s boat on the sea.
The memory is recalled so simply,
My summer in Santorini.

Sur Son Ame Jumelle

On the eyes, no one could truly see;
Through your bundle of joy and beauty.
By a million gazes none could know,
How your soul, feather likened floats.

Lo, deep in my mind, lost in my soul,
There recently came along a part,
Floating carelessly - but till it drew,
near enough. Rare one; that was you!

Mystery resolving at every meet,
Flimsy or purposefully.
I'm almost completely satisfied,
'Almost', since I'd daily say goodbye.


On the eyes, no one could truly know,
You hid your beauty in your soul.

Big Sur

Poet:  Ken Jordan
Poem:  Big Sur.
Edited by:  Sparkle Jordan
written:  July/2015





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  ~~~~~~~   Bixby Creek Bridge

        "Somewhere 
             between Heaven
                       and 
                              Earth."

Colleville Sur Mer

COLLEVILLE  SUR  MER

In uneasy rest
He faces west.
They all face west to America  -
So far away from this beach,
So very far out of reach.

He no longer feels the chinook
Nor the glance of mother’s knowing eye
Over the range on his Utah farm.
He is the son and brother
Of Omaha, Nebraska, and the Sandhills
Beckon him home.

Silence now 
The tolling of the trolley
Car bell over the Bay.
Hear only the swish of beach sand.

He dreams endlessly
In the cold Channel breeze,
From the ocean
Between him and home.

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NOTES

Colleville sur Mer  is where the American cemetery is located in France. All names on the   gravestones face west.
Omaha and Utah are the names of invasion beaches on the Channel coast 
of  France where thousands of US  soldiers died in 1944.

Premium Member La Fille Sur Le Pont

A Girl on a Bridge

There she was, staring into the night
Paris lights shimmering in a soft glow
Her mind lost, twirling in tears
Confusion wrapping her in a warmth of fear

She dreams of a knife threw her chest
To stab away the darkness of misery
She smiles with hope, so close
The river flows beneath
Blackness so inviting
The currents of death to take her away

It takes but a leap, of lost hopes and dreams 
The depths of the river to take your breath away
And your last wishes become filled with envy
For those who still float above you

Many lovers cross the seine
Hand in hand in the night 
Oblivious that all must end
Romantic pains, meet their end
If you are a girl on a bridge

She kissed the river
She caressed the shivering night
She clung to her emptiness
She danced her last fading dance
And wedded death, her last embrace

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