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Premium Member merciless tease

(a series of Senryus)

Oh merciless tease,
heaven’s greatest injustice 
must be temptation

There is no sense in
in the sensual and no real
care in the carnal

They’d begun the rites,
delights and wrongs of such love 
an unworthy two

Anointed and sworn 
by covenants to faithful 
others as they were

Was a single kiss 
what set the violently 
borne fire of thirst? 

Which, carried by the 
winds of want, brought misfortune 
and misadventure

There followed a swift 
contract to sin that enriched
impractical love

Their delightful and
perfect lowliness of mind
banished dull conceits

And then afterwards,
a bookful of non-binding
promises of love
.
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A song for this
the feeling by Steve Lacy [E]

Lowliness in Kingship

Consider David’s and Saul’s kingly path.
Who was beloved?  Who, the saboteur?
Who waited on God enduring much wrath, 
patient, submissive, yet stalwart and sure?

Solomon, who could have asked anything,
gained discretion, approval from his Lord.
Laying aside wealth and fame, this young king
sought wisdom he knew was not his strong chord.

Jesus left heaven’s throne, came down to earth.
Separate, still in the Father's employ,
destined as sacrifice for man’s rebirth.
Body broken, blood spent, ‘twas Jesus’ joy.

Redemption, resurrection, worth the loss
of esteem bearing man’s sin on the cross.

Cracks, Cuts and Curls


Capsulate, wrenching wore around the nook
Never asked to swing her lips and hardness hook
A scary flood of fumes, fire her tears
And the invoice innocence of her beats
Enormously resonant as the dark dirt
Self-like a famished, fainted convert
Echoes the intensity of despair, she oftenly hides
Yet, quietness and lowliness wove at every side
She the rose’ pearl, mourns with an unbearable bow
Vulnerable Bones, cracked beats, and broken hurls
Yet, the prayer’s mat, where she cures and curls
Heaviness altogether haunts her innerness
But, believe her brilliance, vanishing faintness.


No man is completely fit

NO MAN IS COMPLETELY FIT
( Onyenekperechi )

No man is completely fit
Strong enough to exist without exit 
Often we sit close to the deep pit 
Falling low at the slightest hit 

The healthy man does not push death away 
Likewise the sick man does not make it stay 
Death looks for all made of clay 
Bringing them to lowliness with their decay 

The young is old enough to die 
To lie in state is a position anyone can vie 
That I will die is a truth I can't turn to a lie 
Death is a belt that I must tie 

The next second is uncertain 
Can turn gain into pain 
Can deprive a ship of its captain 
Can take away that which you cannot regain 

Waste no time in doing the good 
The standing tree will soon become wood 
The handsome man is already termites' food 
The living man running out of blood

Premium Member PRAISE BE TO GOD FOR MANIFESTING HIS WORKS

November 7 Praises to God Bible Meditations Based on John 9-10

Key Verse – John 9:3 Jesus answered, Neither hath this man sinned, nor his parents: but that the works of God should be made manifest in him.

PRAISE BE TO GOD FOR MANIFESTING HIS WORKS

Praise be to God for manifesting His works in our:
Workmanship by His watchfulness
Weakness along His worthy winning
Waiting inside His will midst His wisdom
Worship according to His wondrous ways
Weariness-wrestlings toward His well-done welcome

John 10:11 Praise be to the Lord for 
being our good Shepherd:
Loving us in His leadership
Lifting us up against lowliness
Liberating us from loneliness-lingering
Letting us listen to Him while on Him, leaning
Lengthening our lives while learning His lessons

John 10:27 Praise be to the Saviour for allowing us 
to hear His voice of: 
Redemption for our repentance and ransom
Restoration, reformation with renewal-readiness
Resurrection toward our righteous rejuvenation-revival
Restraint along our rescue in returning to His restrengthening
Reminders for our reinforcement and reward midst His replenishment. Amen!

November 7, 2024

Premium Member The Look of Love


Sometimes I see the look of love
And wonder at the site
As warm as sunlight from above
Concealed like rain at night

Eyes that reveal a brightness quick
And shyly turn away
Just like the candle’s burning wick
Turns night into the day

The look of love is loneliness
When special ones are gone
The spirit hits a lowliness
Like words without a song

The look of love is bashful laughter
When two souls blend as one
The gentle glow and moments after
The look of having fun

The look of love is like the wind
That blows from clouds above
It lifts the lonely heart and mends...
I love the look of love


Lady

Lady,
I call you Lady,
never met a bit of you,
not in a painting, not in a photograph,
not on a street
nor as a reflection in water or glass.

I see you though,
you're the very youngest
and the most ancient,
you're a tree of prayers
every branch of you a secret bloom
only lips may open.  

Don't ever think of me as seeing you
as an idol to idolize.
You are the flesh of dirt 
and the blown lungs of a stale wind
just as everybody is,
but none of this lowliness
rules you, for you whisper into
our blood and mud,

but lady
your beauty is not for seeing,
your love is not for stealing.
I lift the hem of your skirt
and see my sunrise there
 a shining plantation of all my desires.

That place behind your knees,
that sweet hollow where worlds nest
so worthy of a kiss from reckless angels.

Blindly
I send you the crumbs of my mind
for your fingertips
to gather and feed upon.

Credo

I have marked my place,
I stand now in the
bulging vein of the moment.
No more hunting for meaning
or for anti-meaning,
all socks are white or not.
I am here.
a one-sized loosely fitted mind,
a tick and cross 
on an illogical checklist,
acres stacked upon acres
of fifth dimensional 
doubt, faith, and gnosis,
a bottomless barrel of chewed-over laughter.
I am all things and nothing,
happy to be
whatever you see
and I will not
gainsay your worst opinions,
but embrace every layer of the onion
even though you cannot perceive 
the chameleon gifts
of my all too human superpowers,
or my agreeable acceptance
of your legendary life.
I am rooted in truth
and conspiratorial speculation
finding no fault in either
but still a knowing of what I am,
could have been or was.
I am raised up in my lowliness and glory
no longer there or anywhere
simply this kit and caboodle, this enchilada.
deeply sorry to be so unrepentant
and mostly happy to be sorry,
not a worry
or any flurry of guilt.
Expunged and indelibly revealed
as this ingenuity of self,
here now and gone
all along.

Premium Member The Skateboard: Seku

*Image of Skateboarding Kid by Pixabay.

the skateboard

bored lowliness
well rounded and supportive~~
a downhill rise

2022 April 01
*1st Place*
A BRIAN STRAND STANDARD
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 April 04

*seku: A senryu of three lines with less than seventeen syllables

Premium Member First

First
                            show love,
                            in spite of
                      feelings. Express
                         consideration
                        for others, just
                          as Christ did
                                for us
                                  first.


Let nothing be done through strife or vainglory; but in lowliness of mind let each esteem other better than themselves.
Phillipians 2:3 KJV


6/29/2021
Ninette Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

Alone Im Lonely

I’m sitting alone,
As I do...
I’m chilling in my zone,
Feeling too often blue.

Always stuck in my head,
In an emotional stew.
It’s like a loose thread,
Being pulled through...

Through drowning my sorrows,
With whatever brew.
Wondering about possible tomorrows...
Questioning my moral views.

I am ofttimes prone, 
To this overthinking loneliness.
But still sitting alone,
In all my lowliness...

06/03/2020

Heart In Lowliness

H-eart
I-n
L-owliness
A-nd
R-ighteousness
I-s
O-pen

S-imply
A-llowing
N-iceness
T-o
I-solate
A-rrogant
G-rievous
O-nerousness

Topic: Birthday of Hilario Santiago (March 05) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Fog Lifting

Dew drifting down, blinding the spirit;
         Dimming our course; stealing away the longed for light.

         Yet hope hurries in when a hazy glow enters,
         As the misty shadows take shape beyond.

         Whispered prayer arises as wispy white appears;
         Interwoven wonderfully with the waiting hills;

         Swirling softly through the silent valleys;
         clinging calmly to the earth as the clouds to the sky.

         Rapturous rays rising; warmth distilling!
         Lifting the softly-spun dew heavenward;

         As the hills shine glorious with bright dawning,
         Lowliness of Spirit looks up and is lifted even as the fog.

         The warm presence of the Son abides as promised
         While souls and rays join to shed forth light for this day

Heavenly Order

G-od's heavenly order 
A-ims to implement His statute; 
B-ringing His commandments, 
B-y calling the elders or 
Y-outh. 

S-tay submissive to heavenly order, 
A-s you follow with humility; 
R-emain meek to the Father, 
M-ildly talk to the Almighty. 
I-nclined head shows lowliness, 
E-ighteenth of November; 
N-ever turn a blind eye, 
T-o obey the heavenly 
O-rder.

Keep Up the Good Work

J-ust keep up the good work, 
O-pen your life to success; 
A-llow your mind to think
N-ot of the loss and mess.
N-ow keep up the good work, open your heart to result; 
A-llow your eyes to see not of the men's insult.

R-emain humble before Him, 
O-bey the Lord Almighty; 
S-how your lowliness
E-ven if the day isn't sunny.

O-ctober tenth early morn, 
U-nder the voice from heaven; 
A-im to pay attention, 
N-either ear won't be
O-pen.

R-each the journey's end, 
E-ven during the vilest clime; 
G-ain the eternal life, 
A-s you are firm all the time.
D-eny the wicked ways and evil deeds that lurk; 
O-pen your soul to holiness, keep up the good work.

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