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*Image of Skateboarding Kid by Pixabay. the skateboard bored lowliness well rounded and supportive~~ a downhill rise 2022 April 01 *1st Place* A BRIAN STRAND STANDARD ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 April 04 *seku: A senryu of three lines with less than seventeen syllables

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/9/2022 3:15:00 AM

I have quickly read your winning entry in Brian's contest and found it worthy of its honor. Congrats. Sara Reply

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/9/2022 10:16:00 AM

My heartfelt thanks, Sara, for your wondrous share my friend, Aloha~William

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/6/2022 10:32:00 AM

William, congratulations on your win! Love the opening play on words and the opposing images of down and up in the last line! Beautifully and intricately constructed my friend! Blessings to you! Aloha!

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/6/2022 2:36:00 PM

You're the Creme de la Creme of Sherlockism, Sam, only answers, clues are impotent my friend, with my earnest appreciation, Aloha~William

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/5/2022 4:09:00 AM

Yes motion his only solace…love this piece. Congratulations, SuZ

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/5/2022 4:13:00 PM

An act wakes joy -- thanks aplenty, Suzanne, and my compliments on your aliferous-sect Qijue win my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/5/2022 12:40:00 AM

"a downhill rise" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/5/2022 4:04:00 PM

Beyond expectation waits, Christuraj, and my compliments on your win that almost, in brief, mirrors my "A Temporary Ripple" my friend, Aloha~William

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/4/2022 12:40:00 PM

Great Haiku, I love it, William. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/4/2022 12:52:00 PM

Didn't know the win until your notice, Lasaad, I am exuberant my friend, Aloha~William

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/1/2022 5:43:00 PM

Good contrasts.

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/1/2022 5:47:00 PM

Well said, Kim, Aloha my friend~William