William Kelii Kekaula Poet Senryu

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The Skateboard: Seku

*Image of Skateboarding Kid by Pixabay.

the skateboard

bored lowliness
well rounded and supportive~~
a downhill rise

2022 April 01
*1st Place*
A BRIAN STRAND STANDARD
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 April 04

*seku: A senryu of three lines with less than seventeen syllables

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Sara Kendrick April 9, 2022 at 3:15 AM I have quickly read your winning entry in Brian's contest and found it worthy of its honor. Congrats. Sara Reply William Kelii Kekaula April 9, 2022 at 10:16 AM My heartfelt thanks, Sara, for your wondrous share my friend, Aloha~William

Sam Kauffman April 6, 2022 at 10:32 AM William, congratulations on your win! Love the opening play on words and the opposing images of down and up in the last line! Beautifully and intricately constructed my friend! Blessings to you! Aloha! William Kelii Kekaula April 6, 2022 at 2:36 PM You're the Creme de la Creme of Sherlockism, Sam, only answers, clues are impotent my friend, with my earnest appreciation, Aloha~William

Suzanne Delaney April 5, 2022 at 4:09 AM Yes motion his only solace…love this piece. Congratulations, SuZ William Kelii Kekaula April 5, 2022 at 4:13 PM An act wakes joy -- thanks aplenty, Suzanne, and my compliments on your aliferous-sect Qijue win my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex April 5, 2022 at 12:40 AM "a downhill rise" - Beautiful. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula April 5, 2022 at 4:04 PM Beyond expectation waits, Christuraj, and my compliments on your win that almost, in brief, mirrors my "A Temporary Ripple" my friend, Aloha~William

Sotto Poet April 4, 2022 at 12:40 PM Great Haiku, I love it, William. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. William Kelii Kekaula April 4, 2022 at 12:52 PM Didn't know the win until your notice, Lasaad, I am exuberant my friend, Aloha~William

Kim Rodrigues April 1, 2022 at 5:43 PM Good contrasts. William Kelii Kekaula April 1, 2022 at 5:47 PM Well said, Kim, Aloha my friend~William