Elaborated Poems

Forgotten

Let my heart beat would stop
I would try to be in top,
The believeness is like the building built on sand
But my efforts to build on land;
The water can be evaporated 
But the knowledge can be elaborated??

Earth's top layer is crust 
I want to be in crest,
The pleasant sound of Bansuri makes me calm 
Though I had been harmed ;
I need treasure 
But it needs pressure!!
Categories: elaborated, 10th grade, addiction, depression,
Form: Bio

Times of Change

Extempored Etiquettes
Elaborated conversations of old
Mildly in motion
of words to express
Synesthetic syncopations
silenced inner egos.
Naived out soul
Anticipates long enough
for a change to show-up
As Clouds faded
and day showed up
Life whispers a note
Of Now
Categories: elaborated, addiction, art, beauty, career,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberRAPHAELISTA rossetti prb et al

RAPHAELISTA 
literary
  stylized
symbols
highly
 elaborated
in
extreme
  detail
of wet white
in
bright
  colours
Categories: elaborated, art,
Form: Didactic

UNDER UNDERSTOOD

To be mis understood is to be absorbed 
A rejection of existence by the listener 
The communicator communicating 
But the message is dissonance 
It has happened one two three many times 
Too much so that speaking is distilled 
To specifically what you believe in 
So that you can see me, It is heartbreaking 
I would have taught you so much 
We could have had so much fun
We could have found each other 
In the meanings elaborated with patience 
But I think a little too fast And my word smay slur 
I also do not know many English words 
To describe states of the heart with grace 
and panache I lack finesse I speak too direct
You say am too honest I know no diplomacy 
I might embarrass you while disrespecting my self 
I am too headstrong but you are weak at  heart
you are not talking to me 
You are misunderstanding on purpose to 
Conserve who you are rejecting any other 
So I echo you you you 
Because  To be misunderstood is to be  a broken mirror 
It makes you hate yourself   
Struggling
To find yourself in the other
Categories: elaborated, heart, lonely, longing, love,
Form: Blank verse

Premium MemberDIVISIONISTA degas signac

DIVISIONITA degas signac
superimposed
 shimmering
scumbles
  of tone
shades
 juxtaposed
pastel optics
in
  parallel pigments
intermingled
 closely
  aligned
   blended
spectrums
of
 elaborated
  illusions
foreshortened
Categories: elaborated, art,
Form: Didactic


Premium MemberRENAISSANCISTA michelangelo et al

initiatives
to sparkle
as
   conception
a convincing
  illusion
   powerfully
     elaborated

a vigorous
 scene

initiates
a
 complex analysis
so visual
&
  appreciated
in a
 wondrous manner


      humankind
'neath
the
          divine
            disclosed
the
unique

   renaissance
 of a pieta piece,
tactile touched

Frescos,
paint bright
 fresh as yesterday
the
stupendous
suspended above
   in space
multifaceted
&gifted
 by God's grace.
a
painted
'dreamlike unreality'

stunning perspective
 sublime
 & so poetic
so stylistically
 diverse
Categories: elaborated, art,
Form: Didactic

Hot Chocolate

Sitting,
Alone and uninspired
Ruminating on my throne 
Of the tired

Freezing,
My heater, broken and retired
In a building whose condemnation
Remains desired

Searching,
For some deeper, elaborated meaning
To a poem procrastinated 
A cause for my demeaning 

Sulking,
I lack muse and direction
I can only imagine the forthcoming drear
Of this poem’s lection

Drinking,
My hot chocolate keeps me company
As I mull over this poetry
And choose a word that rhymes only subtley
Categories: elaborated, autumn, chocolate, nonsense, stress,
Form: Quatrain

Premium MemberImpasto Passage

IMPASTO PASSAGE
initiatives
to sparkle
as
bizarre
idiosyncratic
       unusual
features

a wayward conception
so convincing
  as an illusion
with criteria
   powerfully
     elaborated

a vigorous
 scene
  simultaneously
graphically
&typically
    exhausting

 it
initiates
a
 complex analysis
so visual
&
  appreciated
in a
 wondrous manner


THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
Categories: elaborated, poetry,
Form: Other

Premium MemberAmbivalence

AMBIVALENCE
free from convention
       a special destiny
    defining change
singular
          accentuating
       distortions
so visible
yet
     continuous
clear
authentic
discernible
     inscribed
          elaborated
irresistibly
   structured
comparatively
relaxed in  transition


THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
Categories: elaborated, poetry, word play,
Form: Other

Bed Time Story

He is leaving tomorrow
to visit a friend
that leaves me with sorrow
anxiety does extend
though I've talked some concerning this
in poems in the past
I haven't elaborated for reasons I dismiss
amidst a contrast
I'm afraid to be alone
what a strain
this feeling to disown
would stop the pain
when I talk of sleeping
tis the reason why
a vary disrupts my seeking
for peace of mind though I buy
It's just that I'm content
not being apart
I long for duality that was sent
from the heart
a friend is coming over
still no comfort is within me
as I attempt again to curl up under my cover
awake the dark I see
Categories: elaborated, anxiety, sleep,
Form: Rhyme

Chaos of Mind

Chaos of mind Eating, inching, scratching, crawling. 
Deteriorating the tissue of my mind. 
Enveloping miasmic corporeal vibrations. 
Sounds that stretch, twist, and creak. 
Leaking emissions evaporation a contaminate. 
Eyes a window attached to the mind the trenches. Elaborated around the voices eating, itching, scratching crawling. 
Is my sanity dissolved into chaos made impartially?
Categories: elaborated, addiction, anger, anxiety, confusion,
Form: Free verse

About House Hesitated

About House Hesitated

About a house we had hesitated,
Then about design we elaborated;
We concurred,
Was preferred,
And beautiful house was created.

Jim Horn
Categories: elaborated, allegory, analogy,
Form: Limerick

It Was a Riddle

It tickled my feet
It elaborated my feelings
It built my self worth
It awakened my soul

It fed my inner self
It brought new meaning to life
It made me see opportunities
It anchored  my ears

It needed to be solved
It challenged my intellectual
It was the master of art
It said it all without omitting
Categories: elaborated, birth, blessing, creation, culture,
Form: Free verse

Charming Brown

Charming brown it's the smell of a cocoa, 
the brown suit , the caramel perfume,
pouring of a caramel on a brown tea that the
brown shoes descending on brown path,
it is a charming brown.

brown leaves, brown dress,
down the path, up to the trees,
it is more of brown.

brown twigs, brown suit,
smells natural, scent of humility,
down the road,
down to the under-ground,
it is brown color.

brown natural leaves above the brown dress
below it is the 'sweet teeth',
brown leaves and trees just produces sort of taste.

the bouncing infra-red ,red-light on the red leaves,
that improves intelligent
on a major brown suit.

brown weeding gowns, brown nests,
here and up there,
blue sky, white clouds moving to the west
the brown dresses and the brown suits.

pitching down, plunging down, descending down,
going up, lifting up, rising up,
brown dust up in the air,
brown hill, brown shoes,
dancing on a brown path,

red leaves blew up,elaborated by wind 
extending red on a major brown dress,
the major brown Princess, the woman in brown dress,
Categories: elaborated, africa, appreciation, beautiful, bible,
Form: Alliteration

Premium MemberAs Is Moment 22 One Liner

essence elaborated in verse
Categories: elaborated, imagery,
Form: Imagism

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