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Words

Words

Words

Words are simply a gesture of emtions
Words are simply thought processes elaborated
Words are simply content enriched by human responses
Words are simply an sad fault exposed response  eloborated frivilous conjecture of tides of waves collected in text books
Words change only when used by judges judging lest we be judged ourseleves.

Premium Member DISPARATE DISPOSITIONS

essential 
  contrasts
of
  authentic
     ethos
with
   nostalgic
      responses
in
  concentrated
    self-images
  prosaic
    remembrance
of
   inwardness
embraced

individual
  elaborated
coincidences
deliberate
  limitations
&
isolated
 feelings
   revealed

Premium Member Little Hope

Is it so great to hear them everyday
Singing hosannas, playing harps for you?
And you’re not tired of sorting out their prayers
Not bored to see them trying to pursue?
And the concept of paradise, was it enough
Elaborated, or it could have been concealed
To an extent, because the plot seems rough
At least from what so far has been revealed
Is there the smell of summer breeze at morning,
Are there dewdrops on the leaves of apple tree?
A scent of coffee when my darling says I'm coming, 
And there she is, holding a tray for her and me?..
My dear Lord, I guess you’ve been endowed
With a sufficient amount of love and labour
To materialize among the clouds
Please let us live again, do us a favor 
Don’t take away this little hope, my Lord
It’s in your power, though you could disclaim 
Cause nowadays your world is rumbling with wars
Some of the victims may divulge your name.


Forgotten

Let my heart beat would stop
I would try to be in top,
The believeness is like the building built on sand
But my efforts to build on land;
The water can be evaporated 
But the knowledge can be elaborated??

Earth's top layer is crust 
I want to be in crest,
The pleasant sound of Bansuri makes me calm 
Though I had been harmed ;
I need treasure 
But it needs pressure!!

Times of Change

Extempored Etiquettes
Elaborated conversations of old
Mildly in motion
of words to express
Synesthetic syncopations
silenced inner egos.
Naived out soul
Anticipates long enough
for a change to show-up
As Clouds faded
and day showed up
Life whispers a note
Of Now

Premium Member RAPHAELISTA rossetti prb et al

RAPHAELISTA 
literary
  stylized
symbols
highly
 elaborated
in
extreme
  detail
of wet white
in
bright
  colours


UNDER UNDERSTOOD

To be mis understood is to be absorbed 
A rejection of existence by the listener 
The communicator communicating 
But the message is dissonance 
It has happened one two three many times 
Too much so that speaking is distilled 
To specifically what you believe in 
So that you can see me, It is heartbreaking 
I would have taught you so much 
We could have had so much fun
We could have found each other 
In the meanings elaborated with patience 
But I think a little too fast And my word smay slur 
I also do not know many English words 
To describe states of the heart with grace 
and panache I lack finesse I speak too direct
You say am too honest I know no diplomacy 
I might embarrass you while disrespecting my self 
I am too headstrong but you are weak at  heart
you are not talking to me 
You are misunderstanding on purpose to 
Conserve who you are rejecting any other 
So I echo you you you 
Because  To be misunderstood is to be  a broken mirror 
It makes you hate yourself   
Struggling
To find yourself in the other

Premium Member DIVISIONISTA degas signac

DIVISIONITA degas signac
superimposed
 shimmering
scumbles
  of tone
shades
 juxtaposed
pastel optics
in
  parallel pigments
intermingled
 closely
  aligned
   blended
spectrums
of
 elaborated
  illusions
foreshortened

Premium Member RENAISSANCISTA michelangelo et al

initiatives
to sparkle
as
   conception
a convincing
  illusion
   powerfully
     elaborated

a vigorous
 scene

initiates
a
 complex analysis
so visual
&
  appreciated
in a
 wondrous manner


      humankind
'neath
the
          divine
            disclosed
the
unique

   renaissance
 of a pieta piece,
tactile touched

Frescos,
paint bright
 fresh as yesterday
the
stupendous
suspended above
   in space
multifaceted
&gifted
 by God's grace.
a
painted
'dreamlike unreality'

stunning perspective
 sublime
 & so poetic
so stylistically
 diverse

Hot Chocolate

Sitting,
Alone and uninspired
Ruminating on my throne 
Of the tired

Freezing,
My heater, broken and retired
In a building whose condemnation
Remains desired

Searching,
For some deeper, elaborated meaning
To a poem procrastinated 
A cause for my demeaning 

Sulking,
I lack muse and direction
I can only imagine the forthcoming drear
Of this poem’s lection

Drinking,
My hot chocolate keeps me company
As I mull over this poetry
And choose a word that rhymes only subtley

Premium Member Impasto Passage

IMPASTO PASSAGE
initiatives
to sparkle
as
bizarre
idiosyncratic
       unusual
features

a wayward conception
so convincing
  as an illusion
with criteria
   powerfully
     elaborated

a vigorous
 scene
  simultaneously
graphically
&typically
    exhausting

 it
initiates
a
 complex analysis
so visual
&
  appreciated
in a
 wondrous manner


THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived

Premium Member Ambivalence

AMBIVALENCE
free from convention
       a special destiny
    defining change
singular
          accentuating
       distortions
so visible
yet
     continuous
clear
authentic
discernible
     inscribed
          elaborated
irresistibly
   structured
comparatively
relaxed in  transition


THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived

Bed Time Story

He is leaving tomorrow
to visit a friend
that leaves me with sorrow
anxiety does extend
though I've talked some concerning this
in poems in the past
I haven't elaborated for reasons I dismiss
amidst a contrast
I'm afraid to be alone
what a strain
this feeling to disown
would stop the pain
when I talk of sleeping
tis the reason why
a vary disrupts my seeking
for peace of mind though I buy
It's just that I'm content
not being apart
I long for duality that was sent
from the heart
a friend is coming over
still no comfort is within me
as I attempt again to curl up under my cover
awake the dark I see

Chaos of Mind

Chaos of mind Eating, inching, scratching, crawling. 
Deteriorating the tissue of my mind. 
Enveloping miasmic corporeal vibrations. 
Sounds that stretch, twist, and creak. 
Leaking emissions evaporation a contaminate. 
Eyes a window attached to the mind the trenches. Elaborated around the voices eating, itching, scratching crawling. 
Is my sanity dissolved into chaos made impartially?

About House Hesitated

About House Hesitated

About a house we had hesitated,
Then about design we elaborated;
We concurred,
Was preferred,
And beautiful house was created.

Jim Horn

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