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Hot Chocolate

Sitting, Alone and uninspired Ruminating on my throne Of the tired Freezing, My heater, broken and retired In a building whose condemnation Remains desired Searching, For some deeper, elaborated meaning To a poem procrastinated A cause for my demeaning Sulking, I lack muse and direction I can only imagine the forthcoming drear Of this poem’s lection Drinking, My hot chocolate keeps me company As I mull over this poetry And choose a word that rhymes only subtley

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/12/2023 7:29:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Karen Croft

Date: 10/10/2023 1:08:00 AM

I like your word choices Welcome to poetrysoup

Sabrina Vignola
Date: 10/10/2023 9:45:00 AM

Thank you!

Karen Jones

Date: 10/9/2023 11:55:00 PM

I think poets go through writers block if you will often before a brilliant breakthrough. Like maybe it is the calm before the storm? Love this cozy poem.

Sabrina Vignola
Date: 10/10/2023 9:45:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words, Karen! I did get into a groove right after writing this, so I think you are right about the calm before the storm.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2023 9:22:00 PM

I often sit and ruminate and write on my throne... but I am queen of poop on poetry soup lol, thanks for sharing your rhyme I can relate when the muse cannot be woken from her slumbers. hugs jan xx

Sabrina Vignola
Date: 10/10/2023 9:45:00 AM

Thank you, Jan! Hugs xx