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Cutting Down Trees In Autumn


In Autumn chain edges destroy the trees' only air 
She, while in their bark's raw breath infuse,
As if leaves underdone weren't truly everywhere
On Autumn's corset; within, her body's womb 

A stolen breath
Gripped onto her corset
A leaf's first memory lasts first
The oak's years cut from giving her birth

She left in its ground spaces worth
falling for

I am feeling down In the dumps

I am feeling down
In the dumps
It is not your fault
My friend
I totally blame myself for it
Yesterday I was feeling
Tired all day
I even felt asleep in front of the computer
I had no excuses
I had to go right away to bed
This morning I woke up
At 5:59 am
I got ready to started the day
I had my big healthy breakfast
It feel me up until lunch time
I am a poet and I write poetry
And I must say that is what I do best

Tone it down my dear

#Tone_it_down_my_dear
breath runs out of my lungs, this dungeon on my body grips tighter, yet I'm still nearing to her finer reflection.., 

Glare in her face keep trapping my courage to confront her, I look, but still come back with tattered emotions.., 

she creates so much iniquities to my sanity. One glance in her eyes, in this maze of her beauty, constantly return with drained batteries of my emotional and mental gps, leaving me wondering in the wilderness of her pulchritudeousness...

Wonder if her heart poses so pure and innocent  as her smile, Troubled is my soul and mind, when fear keep piling wonders in place of confidence...

in my dreams I'm man, but her presence turns me into a lad, how hard I try to stand firm  but my knees fails my strength, I need special ingredients of courage, mine, she had long exhausted
#Poetic_Ink


The Weight I Lay Down

I carried grief,
an ache deep in my chest,
each breath tight,
each step heavy,
my world closing
around the hurt that stayed.

I held that pain
in my hands,
turning it over and over
as if feeling it
kept me alive.

But time flows on
and even stones soften...
edges worn down
by patient currents.

One morning,
I set the stone aside.
Not because I forgot,
not because I excused,
but because I was tired
of dragging yesterday
into each tomorrow.

Forgiveness is not
a letting go meant only for me:
it is what saved my chest,
the breath that rebounded
the sky opening above.

Premium Member High Above -- Down Below

  
     high above… shines love

        celestial skies… peaceful dove… 

            down below... war’s glow

Friends

Can you tell that I am down bad?
Is it so painfully obvious that I like you?
Sure, I text you everyday,
and I ask you enough questions to make the press seem amateur,
and yeah I keep trying to hang out,
but that's what friends do, right?
friends. 
Just friends.


Premium Member down in up

will it up
grill it up
fill it up to brimming
swill to still those silly cells
drowned in what they’re swimming

press ‘em up
mess ‘em up
dress ‘em up with practice
a hoarder in its order
and thorned as any cactus

mock it up
talk it up
chalk it up to neurons
firing with mis-wiring
the receptors that they were on

hike 'em up
strike 'em up
spike 'em up your coursings
joy's in that sweet poison
tho it's life that you're divorcing

burn it up
churn it up
turn it up to 'leven 
bursting drums, but first it comes
and lies to you like heaven

smoke 'em up
toke 'em up
choke 'em up a-breathing
red, the mud, as thin as blood
to leave your angels seething

tighten up
whiten up
lighten up and torch it
melt the moon into the spoon
and soon you'll swoon to scorch it

wind it down
bind it down
grind it down to fill you
you won't miss
amidst your bliss
the sweetest kiss ... to kill you …

her sweetest kiss ... will kill.





Copyright © 2023 Gregory Richard Barden

( photographic art created copyright-free by the poet with GALA AI software )

Premium Member Deep Down We Knew

Deep down I knew just like me you are only human too.
I'm grateful for you still wanting me as someone you woo.
Deep down you knew it too, that maybe I am meant to be with you.

Premium Member Turn down your violent rhetoric, America, you’re losing your soul

Turn down your violent rhetoric, America, you’re losing your soul.
Wish I could, but the First Amendment has no volume control.
And what if the violent rhetoric gets dangerously loud?
That’s what the Second Amendment is all about.
So you can offer no hope, no guiding instruction?
Just what Mark Twain saw a long time ago:
Every civilization carries the seeds of its own destruction.

Don't Look Down

Do you become
famished
before you get
hungry

Do you become
smitten
when being
alone

Do you become
distant
once over
the target

Do you become
vagrant
though always
at home

Do you become
younger
with wrinkles
upon you

Do you become
foreign
while taking
the pledge

Do you become
angry
and lost
in your garden

Do you become
tempted
when nearing
— the edge

(Dreamsleep: September, 2025)

Water rolling down



Water rolling down from the pitcher 
A long time ago, one purple morning 
The sun took a seat in the argentine flow 
It had quietly entered through the window 

                __________________
                September 6, 2025

Premium Member Put the Curtain Down

what else could happen? It is freezing outside
but look at the snow crystals grandma says
Someone yells for her to put the curtain down
They claim the cold air is getting in
I wander outside
wanting to get next to the beauty of winter
snow lightning makes my day!

Premium Member Weekend wind down

you're laying back and toking
is that a funny cigarette you're smoking?
~ looking suspiciously calm and mellow


Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2025

Premium Member When the Chips are Down

The Angry Little Chipmunk spotted his prey...

He moved into position, ready to Pounce!

But a Rabid Squirrel, took his nuts for a whirl...

No Way! Each day I'm getting thinner by the Ounce!

Going Down

I don't endorse 'going with flow'
for of course you never know
if the current will funnel
you down the drain
the tubes or flume
through the tunnel
toward the spume
to where you end up
in the sewer below
so as I'm in no rush to gush
or feel completely flushed
here and now I do avow
for me the bowl on the whole
is a non-starter a definite no-go

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