Water rolling down



Water rolling down from the pitcher 
A long time ago, one purple morning 
The sun took a seat in the argentine flow 
It had quietly entered through the window 

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                September 6, 2025

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Date: 9/5/2025 11:24:00 PM
Such a beautiful usage of words and it has a sweet flow.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/5/2025 11:36:00 PM
Glad you liked it. Thank you.
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