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will it up
grill it up
fill it up to brimming
swill to still those silly cells
drowned in what they’re swimming

press ‘em up
mess ‘em up
dress ‘em up with practice
a hoarder in its order
and thorned as any cactus

mock it up
talk it up
chalk it up to neurons
firing with mis-wiring
the receptors that they were on

hike 'em up
strike 'em up
spike 'em up your coursings
joy's in that sweet poison
tho it's life that you're divorcing

burn it up
churn it up
turn it up to 'leven 
bursting drums, but first it comes
and lies to you like heaven

smoke 'em up
toke 'em up
choke 'em up a-breathing
red, the mud, as thin as blood
to leave your angels seething

tighten up
whiten up
lighten up and torch it
melt the moon into the spoon
and soon you'll swoon to scorch it

wind it down
bind it down
grind it down to fill you
you won't miss
amidst your bliss
the sweetest kiss ... to kill you …

her sweetest kiss ... will kill.





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( photographic art created copyright-free by the poet with GALA AI software )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 9/13/2025 8:26:00 AM
Long time no see, Greg. A very (almost) disturbing rhyme. Regards, Su
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