Capitulated Poems | Examples

Premium Member With just a stone

Goliath was a big threat to Israel
A giant with intimidating records 
Of military prowess which turned Israelite soldiers 
To a bunch of faithless cowards
And to an army of lily livered derelicts
As they capitulated in fear 
And let the sleeping dog lie
While Goliath had his fill
Threatening God’s own army 
But it took a lively faith and just a stone 
To bring the mountain of a giant 
Crashing to a disgraceful end
As David used faith as heavenly currency 
To purchase heavenly grace
And brought the boastful philistine
To a dismal end
Are you faced with any life’s challenges?
Look back with faith on God’s track record in your life
And be filled with amazing strength and power 
To overcome all Goliaths threatening your very existence

Healing

Was I blind... 
Or had I willful blindness?
I was surely not ignorant,
Neither was I acquainted.
Heart was in gale,
Mind did acquiesce.
I was always a coward,
Who never confronted.

I saw those flags,
Brightest and limpid.
Red in qualms,
Redder in distrust,
Reddest in name callings,
You were my dear,
DOMINEERING IN EVERYTHING.

You were preeminent,
That is why I capitulated.
But that was show,
I never calculated.

Yes I did a mistake,
Yes I am admitting,
You tought me a lot,
a lot destructing,
I am now back,
See here my dear,
Here is my audacity.


The Moon Commences Its' Illusion

the moon commences its' illusion
it rides the crest fully
survivor of Roche's Limit
survivor of human prediction
filling the night with shadow
my early morning walks
the light in the distance
calls thru canopied jungle path
the setting moon
stepping on the soft white beach
where a silver highway plays
in the rippling water, i am
the human past who long ago
beheld such a sight
without the shaman's cheap trick
nor the cold touch of science
have accepted the moon just is
beautiful to behold
we let each other be
we are one and the same
dancing thru the universe
and when this is no more
we will be lip to lip

i do not know what God is
and have no such need
yet whatever it is
it is magnificent

the heavens live to die
and in that death
life finds itself again
my wishes, mere mortal longing
that so might i
even Rimbaud capitulated
the reprobates' fear of reprobation
and i have but one question
before the empyreal throne
is there in heaven, a moon

         Norma's roof Santa Cruz   95

Turn of Events

What began as an ordinary day 
took an unexpected turn for the better
with the delivery of a large bouquet 

Attached to the bouquet was a letter 
its contents at present unknown 
but she hoped it wouldn't upset her

Perhaps the letter was meant to atone?
she really hoped that was the case 
his behaviour she did not condone 

So shaking of hands and tense of face 
she read the words upon the sheet 
heart thumping and picking up pace.... 

Her happiness was now complete! 
he had capitulated to her demands 
and agreed to the new lounge suite  



5 stanza
Terza rima
Written 30 July  2022

Kryptonite

you knew the feeling of weakness,
the tremble of your famished body,
the restless mope of a spirit,
groveling tired thoughts.
but then. . .

you laid eyes upon him,
you discovered another weakness,
fustigated with heart palpitations,
insides nerved with desire,
languid with infatuation.

a predilection of the soul,
your heart unwavering with love,
for he who made your body weak
makes you drown in exuberance too.
heart and mind perplexed in reactions.

how can his mere presence,
make you aberrate from yourself?
stoked in oblivescence of yesterday,
he becomes your now, your today
and everyday - satiating every thought.

he overpowers your senses,
your feelings, your gullibility to believe,
you are capitulated to his being
as someone who carries your world,
you needed him, you prayed for him.

but you couldn't have him,
you could never touch him,
you could not dream of him,
yet you were candidly in love
with a man who was your
kryptonite.


Ebbs and Flows

there was a moment when
my smile broadened 
and its radius found
joy in the distance
as the future became apparent.

there was a moment when
my smile dissolved
and its dissappearance wore
wounds of recollections
as a void became apparent.

there was a place where
my heart circulated warmth
and hope became a river over
which aspirations floated
as a life captured continuation.

there was a place where
my heart had drained
and vitality became an ideal over
which a fading mind mulled
as a life capitulated to a destiny.

there was a manner to how
my thoughts had succeeded
and pieces absorbed emotion while
recovery became probable
as a puzzle began to forge.

there was a manner to how
my thoughts had grieved
and lines drenched in confession while
silence became cries
as a piece began to forge.

Irretrievable

I stroll a silvered landscape
where trees are silhouetted spears,
stabbing memories of days first walked with you . . .
ice traceries, firey strands of longing lace,
wrap the crumbling dream,
like brittle, curling tinsel from childhood holidays. 
A burning stream of cold tumbles seaward,
dislodging jagged stones, desire and disgust;
wounding barren feet.

Backward . . .
I trace pink-tinged footprints
along the line of demarcation
where love once gamboled in innocence
before the moon capitulated
and collapsed into the sea.

Lovely she was, but she is no more.

Copyright August 3, 2018

Witty Paradox

Let's say we have capitulated 
yes, let's say we have succumbed
to their whimsical naivété and inane wisdom
Let us assume that it is all phoney
that it is a bogus hoax-filled folklore
We shall now pretend that we have been beguiled by such marvelous
exercise of ludicrous folly
Such bombardment of contorted philosophy

But in our gullibility we shall yet ask
in sheepish inquisition and meek certainty
if this course so pitiably slandered be nothing but deceit,
why then does it stand conspicuously so therapeutic?
why has it made men
who traversed through the impossible vortex of
reality's odd challenges?
why has it given Invigoration with hope 
the haggard Destitute?
Why has it restored green to those fallen human twigs
Why has it steadied nerves and halted addictions?
Why has it healed the sick and made disappear tumults?
Why has it prognosticated that which we now perceive
Does nothingness do that
Does nothingness tender an insight so revealing,
So infinite.
Does nothingness and baseless belief 
deliver from the vague labyrinth of man's ordination

if these be true
Who then doubt's the veracity
Why then disprove religion

Premium Member Estimating Nine Months From Eskimo Kisses

ESTIMATING NINE MONTHS FROM ESKIMO KISSES

TUNDRA tunics
tendered,
holding hot
homeothermic
sentient swaddling,
stirred with
warm waves of
cocoa cresting charm,
bathed in barometric
swoon.
sweetheart neckline
netted nefariously
close -
charm capitulated.
frowns forever forlorn,
as aromatics allure —
cologne colonization,
fever-pitch
of friendship,
not so subtly
sensuous —
harbored hashtag,
blue breath
below freezing —
frenetic, freeing
OF ovulating applause.

12/4/2017

Coterie Part Two

The illicit flames of cajole will wane like an impetuous act of wind.
Annul with impervious aplomb
Waxing perspicacious avenues
Clearing the nebulous
The schism extricate judicious clarity
Vicarious envoy
Omnious stance
Intrinsic string of which I now belong accrues each dawn
Tenable apotheosis oracular
Aberrant paths engage in the light as the nocturnal recividist abated
The diaphanous window capitulated to alloy
Congential precedence gives prerogative by inveterate enigma
Tangible motif clings
Precarious simplicity carry ubiquitous propensity
Equanimity and audacity interchange
Swrod for Sword
Faux Pas to be no more
Impeccable prowess on inimitable wings
To be cognizant is to see
Rendezvous at the fete
Its adjacent to everything
Magnanimous in all things
Taciturn to the ludicrous
Anithetical of perdition
Verbatim by the imbued
Repertoire 9f the genesis
By Christy Teas

Recce

RECCE

Blow me away.
Take me within the storm
Embrace me let me know that you are the stronger one.
Let me know God is to fear
This is his world.

Wind is of a greater source.

I hear the canopy over the hammock switching in and out.
The tables turn upside down as the windows shattered loud.
A windstorm came without rain and the peace became disturbed.
Fearing the wrath of a greater source, we sought shelter.
This is God’s world.

Wind is omnipotent.

As nature begins to calm itself, the wind capitulated.
Bringing fresh air and a nice environment, we begin to investigate.
Reconnaissance discovered all is well.
The stability was felt.
Our findings are that God cares.
____________________________________________|
Scribe August 26, 2015!
Form: Imagism

A Different Understanding

A conglomerate of death lives all around me. 
Life is not what it used to be. 
Dogs no longer run, fish no longer swim, my heart no longer beats. 
The white sheet is suffocating me. 
I used to see it fly in the wind, 
But it has captured me.
I have capitulated to its power.
I cannot help myself, 
No one can help me. 
The balance has broken. 
Life becomes death. 
I am gone, 
I have dissipated into nothingness. 
I am nothing. 
I was never anything.
I will be no more,
Just like I always have been.

To Intercede the Importunate

Having fissioned the mind 
To intercede the importunate
And petitioned wisdom inside 
Idle and dissipated 
As tremendous illusions 
pervades the soul
The unsurpassed revolt of 
capitulated distortions 
A percussion of thoughts
That solicits affectations of such
Form: Concrete

Piano Chords

Preposterous melody won't exist,
Inside a piano without the chord's beat
Aubade is formed when dolefulness emits
Nails the body to where she always sits;
Ordering her fingers to start a writ.

Corners her world with piano as a friend
Heaves fro the melancholia life has sent
Obsolete in the past yet still remains
Rest in the hands of the hellion of dents
Deceiving the chords life composed to mend

Carted away from the womb of thy mom,
Dispatched to fosters as a surly wan
Ego disappears to the children's scrum
For years she can't find her ruined life's sum

Guided and loved with the help of the rank
An afflatus for three hearts to collide
But deep beneath, she had always been mock
Called in by her fosters as out of luck

Door to door, she lagged capitulated
Reminds herself the poem she narrated
Misses the time her heart elevated
Falls for a man who's crossed-dressing blended

Solitude before but now chaperoned
Laminated by her man's trifle tone
Timbre has echoed when they broke the stone
Do you hear the sixteen chords of her song?
Form: ABC

The Germans

The Germans 

1945 I saw the defeated German army marching
on a gritted road made by Russian prisoners of war,
 It had not been raining for a week their uniforms 
were dusty, no longer starched and stylish.
I saw some of my friends there and waved, was told 
not to wave to the enemy. The defeated soldiers 
were marched to the prisoner camp formerly  
occupied by the Russians who were being sent home
to an uncertain future: having capitulated to 
the enemy many, if not all, were executed.

Now so many years later the Germans are back on top
and it is deserved; they fell foul for the idea of a racist 
ideology and paid the price. Hard working people their 
place at the top table in Europe is assured.
Form: Sonnet

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