Recce

RECCE Blow me away. Take me within the storm Embrace me let me know that you are the stronger one. Let me know God is to fear This is his world. Wind is of a greater source. I hear the canopy over the hammock switching in and out. The tables turn upside down as the windows shattered loud. A windstorm came without rain and the peace became disturbed. Fearing the wrath of a greater source, we sought shelter. This is God’s world. Wind is omnipotent. As nature begins to calm itself, the wind capitulated. Bringing fresh air and a nice environment, we begin to investigate. Reconnaissance discovered all is well. The stability was felt. Our findings are that God cares. ____________________________________________| Scribe August 26, 2015!
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Tor Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 12:07 AM
Excellent write. A late congratulation. I love this write.
Walker  Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 6:43 AM
Thanks Micheal for you awesome response. Verlena
A. Sharma Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 1:17 AM
Congrats on your superb winning write Verlena!
Walker  Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 6:44 AM
Thanks Upma for your super-awesome response. Verlena
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August 30, 2015 at 11:10 PM
Verlena, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my WIND contest. SKAT LOVE
Walker  Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 2:38 PM
Thanks Skat for this awesome support. Verlena
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 8:32 AM
God will never leave us nor forsake us so long as we cling to Him and acknowledge who is.. =') love the presentation of this poem.. the strong lines then comes the so soft line at the end!!~Olive Eloisa =')
Walker  Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 2:38 PM
Awesome support Olive! Thanks... Verlena
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August 28, 2015 at 8:37 AM
I like the mood of this piece. God does indeed care.
Walker  Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 2:39 PM
Thanks Richard for your awesome remarks... Verlena
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