Irretrievable

I stroll a silvered landscape
where trees are silhouetted spears,
stabbing memories of days first walked with you . . .
ice traceries, firey strands of longing lace,
wrap the crumbling dream,
like brittle, curling tinsel from childhood holidays. 
A burning stream of cold tumbles seaward,
dislodging jagged stones, desire and disgust;
wounding barren feet.

Backward . . .
I trace pink-tinged footprints
along the line of demarcation
where love once gamboled in innocence
before the moon capitulated
and collapsed into the sea.

Lovely she was, but she is no more.

Copyright August 3, 2018
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Barden Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 3:46 PM
This is so exquisite, Faye, poignant and melancholy, with so much beauty crimped on the edges - love it and fav-ing. I DO hope you return to us ... :-(
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 6:24 PM
Faye, I love your moon metaphor in this beautiful poem. Congratulations on your high placement! : )
Cornish Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Hi Faye, I bounced this among the top winners from the time you entered it - well thought - well presented and a write you can be always proud of. You get better all the time and you started from a high level.
Gentry Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 7:28 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
Wigley Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 1:34 AM
This is lovely, Congrats on your win! Viv x
Richards Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 7:43 PM
I adore these lines "before the moon capitulated and collapsed into the sea.! Wow.....this is wonderful, Faye ! Congrats on your high placement with this beauty!
Gauthier Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 6:28 PM
Lovely, Faye. Congrats on your top win.
Onclaud Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 1:17 PM
ohh, such a regal, poignant write flawlessly scribed ... glad to read you again, faye... huggs
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