The Moon Commences Its' Illusion

the moon commences its' illusion
it rides the crest fully
survivor of Roche's Limit
survivor of human prediction
filling the night with shadow
my early morning walks
the light in the distance
calls thru canopied jungle path
the setting moon
stepping on the soft white beach
where a silver highway plays
in the rippling water, i am
the human past who long ago
beheld such a sight
without the shaman's cheap trick
nor the cold touch of science
have accepted the moon just is
beautiful to behold
we let each other be
we are one and the same
dancing thru the universe
and when this is no more
we will be lip to lip

i do not know what God is
and have no such need
yet whatever it is
it is magnificent

the heavens live to die
and in that death
life finds itself again
my wishes, mere mortal longing
that so might i
even Rimbaud capitulated
the reprobates' fear of reprobation
and i have but one question
before the empyreal throne
is there in heaven, a moon

         Norma's roof Santa Cruz   95

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Date: 3/8/2023 5:43:00 AM
Aha i hope there are moons in heaven too as i am an ardent lunar lover. This whole poem is awesome with fab word choice wow! Kudos!! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 3/6/2023 4:43:00 PM
written in my first year of sobriety all these years later i see my first steps away from a life where no beliefs exist into a life of belief...poets it is so important you keep these things to see where you walk now....another is i see God already in the equation working because beneath that roof would come a woman from far away who would walk me deeper and deeper into a sober life...28 years later and still sober i can see where God kept opening doors and like Daniel i walked in faith thru all
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