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Premium Member What's In A Title - Black Cat Moan

Contest: Black Cat Moan by Glenn Hughes
Sponsor: Robert James Liguori
Date: July 7th 2026


A title can be the make or break
On if a work is read.
If it sparks some intrigue 
Then ideas fill your head.

It draws your eyes and pulls you in
To see what can be found,
Just like Glenn Hughes song, "Black Cat Moan"
Has expressions quite profound.

He's on an inward journey of recovery,
Some soul and spiritual healing.
The title alone - "Black Cat Moan"
Reveals the pain he's feeling!

A title can be a prècis of the work
Or it can give readers a clue.
It aids interpretation.
Though that's up to me and you.

So as I write my poems 
I'll give some thoughtful time
To create a title that might give away
The reason for the rhyme.

Octaves of love

Love is beautiful, it is kind and caring 
Love is unconditional, it is looking after and being looked after 
Every fight, every argument is a strength 
It can make or break a relationship 
Until it becomes too much, too many fights, too many arguments 
Yet not enough love shared, love shifts
It turns to betrayals , it turns to pain 
Love can be the best and worst, it can destroy a person but also heal
Love can happen in many forms, but love can be strength and weakness 
Yet everyone loves, it is inevitable.

Always Burn

Words are just words, each made by a different letter,
one added to another, makes it even better.
 Words without form, have no meaning you see,
until we arrange the words, as we want them to be.
 Passed down through generations, the words we build,
not truly seeing, what they yield.
 Mighty and powerful, they become you see,
those very words, rule over you and me.
 We are all capable, of those words we speak,
to find in life, those thing’s we seek.
 Words are the keys, to unlock this world, in which we live,
words are the fruits, of our garden, to others that we give.
 They can make us, or they will break us, you see,
words play a bigger part than you or me.
 The power of the spoken word, who can break its grips,
especially when those words, come from lying lips.
 Words, break words, people breaks people, with their word,
no matter how you put them together, they will be heard.
 So the words you speak, can make or break,
which side of the words would you partake.
 For what we give out, will always return,
a house made of wood, will always burn.


An Ocean of Being

For a  Beautiful Verse Poem Contest by Constance La France
(12syllables/12lines)

vessels of being sail the cold surface of seas
oblivious to what may be lying below
journeys of coming and going, as it may please
of underlying truth, it does not need to know 
whilst eternal tempests may rage in this above
a serenity of truth lives in the under
beneath the swell of in-between, somewhere is love
but how shall a vessel, as such seek this wonder
for the being, will the searching be make or break
at the same time, surviving the eye of a storm
and be more than, avoiding the wreck of heartbreak
finally finding truth, in the one who is warm

INSTIGATING

In my country 
For you to make sense 
You need to have money
For you to be respected 
You have to throw money around
For you to find love
You need to have money.

Every effect 
A cause 
 A man's wife may either 
"Make" or "break" him
Everyone has their 
own style of expressing things.

Forgetting we're souls
Not the body 
The soul is limitless 
And the body is very limited 
We're from the infinite source
Never to be limited to substance or things but purpose.

Premium Member Pondering a Parakeet

      A parakeet is a talking bird
        He’ll repeat whatever you say

     Which, depending on your mood
        Can make or break your day


SUCK UP

Move or walk 
With those you confide in
So you can do whatever you want
Without being fearful or timid.

Pay attention 
So you don't, fall a victim 
You never pay twice 
Maybe you lost attention 
Letting your opposition 
To  take advantage of you again.

Stay strong, stand firm
But be fragile 
To those 
Who wanna see you on top
Not low, so they can glow
Your circle, your elevator 
Into another realm or level 
The people you keep either make or break you, be aware!

Aren't We All?

Aren't We All?

Alone in a vast ocean
Attacked by waves of emotion

Searching for that sea of tranquility
Trapped in this wretched reality

If we could only find the release
And escape to peace

But chaos fills the time
Even as I write my rhyme

How can this be?
If all was only up to me

I would run with empathy
If allowed to choose rightly

We all fly headlong with no clue
When flying blind like we all do

Ragged and well worn
From our wants we get torn

It's never appealing
When all our senses go reeling

We get hard jerked from highs to low
These lessons in life we may need to grow

Yet many fight the flow
Showing all they never did know

It's the choices we make
It's make or break

Run and hide if you choose
But then you suddenly loose

To bring changes about
Don't pout

We must work in harmony with the flow
We are caught in the power of this ocean, you know


When freedom rings
There is a special joy that brings

Premium Member make or break

mathematic is to make or break
a solution is to make or break
mathematic is a solution
mathematic is the answer to the solution
mathematic is the answer to make or break
the answer is the question to the solution
the answer is the question to the mathematic

the answer is the question to make or break
the answer is the heir
the heir is the conqueror to the question
the heir is the heir to the solution
the heir is the heir to make or break
the answer is to conquer the question
the conquer is to conquer the heir of the question

the conquer is to conquer the heir of the solution
the conqueror is the solution of the conqueror
the conqueror of the solution is the conqueror of the mathematic
power is a heir of power
a conqueror is a heir of power
power conquer power to a heir of power
power is to make or break

Make Or Break Leader

Nation bloom or doom
Depend upon the leader
Either make or break.

Gnosis

I swim in the vast ocean of mind and 
plumb its depths for treasure 
The pleasure is all mine as it exercises 
my will to be great 
Many covet life's precious jewels but aren't 
willing to give what it takes in return 
I've learned that nothing is free in this game of 
life and high stakes
The price can make or break a man depending 
on his perceptions reach
High science is a vault that can never be breached
by the mind of a layman
You can climb Jacob's Ladder high into the sky 
of a mind by saving life
Heaven awaits atop the stairs like a loving and 
faithful wife
Just & true are the words being spilled from the
hermetically sealed
The sight of such truths can blind a man with eyes
that don't see & can't feel
Giving faith to those who didn't previously believe 
in what's real

Poem written in 2021 from my book Poetic Gnosis 
available on Amazon to read for free or purchase

Premium Member Loco Lyric Remix

Y yo loco loco..
Could it be wrong to kick back and just write? 
What’s your passion? 
I’ve gotta a lot of thoughts 
I’ve got a lot of plans;
There’s a real one in your reflection,
money doesn’t make you real;
Eyes on the prize when it’s make or break,
I’m gonna take the game and change it;
Y Yo loco loco..
I’m a Kamikaze
crashing into everything;
Loco loco.. All eyes on me.

Premium Member Meeting new people

first impressions count
they make or break how you think 
person really is

My Day

I hate that your attention
has the power
to make or break 
my day.

Sports Nut

Fanatical fan
Surfing waves of emotion
Make or break my day!

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