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Premium Member Bleeding Before Rome -2
Yet at this very moment the cathedral was crumbling
down upon the cries of foresaken refugees, 
the monastery's walls wobbling from war's wreckage, 
and as the black bursts billowed into sun drenched brutality
with the bodies of...

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Categories: commenced, culture, heart, war, world war ii,
Form: Epic



Long In the Tooth Male Doth Recount Reflect Reimagine
Long in the tooth male doth recount, reflect, reimagine...
his woebegone damn dental daze today May 5th, 2021 

No particular rhyme nor reason
garden variety indentured flunky (me)
revisits his salmagundi salad days, 
when oral blight smote 
left...

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Categories: commenced, 2nd grade, absence, age, body, cinco de
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Jeremiah chapter thirty five k j v
The Lord is faithfull.!
Thesselonians ch 3 v 3-5

Jerimiah in the midst of the rebbelious people, had taken
Note of a sobdrly clad 'new group to his awareness' he made
Enquiry at the market stalls, and was told...

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Categories: commenced, appreciation, education, endurance,
Form: Narrative
Premium Member A World Without Pity
After wishing me a good morning, he said that it was all set,
It was time to raze the house, even though I wasn't in debt!

But they wanted to build a big highway, exactly in this...

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Categories: commenced, adventure, fantasy, home, lost, time, world,
Form: Couplet
Premium Member Seven Last Words of Jesus
I.Jesus Spoke to His Father

Jesus spoke to His Heavenly Father
Raising up to heaven His ardent pray’r
With deep bleeding wounds that he’d all endured,
Still hang on the cross to make our soul pure.
Words He uttered were...

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© Len Gasun  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: commenced, celebration,
Form: Crown of Sonnets



Light On the Devil's Chord - Day 21
The waters of the Holy Spirit stirred with strength
And commenced to churn itself alive inside the well,
Forming a new maelstrom so radiant it seemed to rise in special presentation,
Roaring its heartfelt existence known
Our prince roared...

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Categories: commenced, change, conflict, courage, devotion, inspiration, love, pain,
Form: Epic
Premium Member chapter 152- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Wedding Surprise
Date:  April  4,  2051

Dolly had Molly and Holly delayed
In the dinning area while she secured 
Any loose ends. They had most of
The assemblages in place. The aisle
The flowers? Delilah had questions 
"Mommy...

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Categories: commenced, allusion, black love,
Form: Alliteration
Premium Member Chapter 167--- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLYANNA: Holly Damian and the Hakim clan
September   2051

Molly Dolly and Holly were busy celebrating the end of spring  inthe garden.  Sidney joined Adonis Kyon CJ and Damian  in the weight room.  As they busied themselves...

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Categories: commenced, celebration, color, family, father son, for teens,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Snow
The very fact of being alive, often causes one to seek adventure;
And sometimes it is no deterrent, when it carries traces of danger.

I was not a seasoned survivalist, but very much loved the outdoors,
Like varicolored...

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Categories: commenced, adventure, fantasy, friendship love, magic, mountains, snow,
Form: Couplet
Premium Member Chapter 127 -- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: the Women's Day With the Hakim Clan
July 2049 the 13th Dolly and Molly
Celebrated their  45th birthday wih
Damian and Holly.
Today was a pleasant day initially 
Then it rained and rained. Now,
Damian spoke with his brother Sidney 
To decide the plan for...

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Categories: commenced, silence,
Form: Alliteration
June nineteenth one hundred and fifty nine years ago
June nineteenth one hundred and fifty nine years ago

The conclusion of the American Civil War commenced with the articles of surrender agreement of the Army of Northern Virginia on April 9, at Appomattox Court House,...

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Categories: commenced, america, anxiety, crush, evil, humanity, november, racism,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member The direct path
In the void soul takes a consciousness leap
but to get there we must leave mind behind,
whence in staid stillness thus, we go in deep,
becoming over time, divine aligned.
Love the litmus test for thought, word and...

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Categories: commenced, spiritual,
Form: Crown of Sonnets
Inextricably Rooted With Hair Fixation
Inextricably rooted with hair fixation

As a lad in grade school,
yours truly, (a diminutive, intuitive,
oversensitive, and vegetative potato head kid,
whose voice exhibited
a severe nasal twang)
felt envious at other boys,
especially those young bucks
who sported budding antlers
plus thick...

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Categories: commenced, 11th grade, 12th grade, 5th grade, 6th
Form: Rhyme
Save Me From The Bare Darkness
{"I wish somebody, some entity would’ve told me, even warned me with the intuitiveness that lies within the motherly instincts, the nature of humanity without malevolent reluctance. 
That lying in the darkness for whom which...

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Categories: commenced, absence, abuse, addiction, betrayal, corruption, death, deep,
Form: Free verse
Ode To a Wretched Robot
“You meddling mechanical moron,
you’ve ruined everything,
the thingamabob is running amok,
can’t you hear the alarm bells ring?
You clinking, clanking cretin,
you demented digital dunce,
you never do what I tell you,
and I’ve warned you more than once.
You’re a...

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Categories: commenced, humor, science fiction,
Form: Light Verse
Premium Member Nicholas Street Jail
The structure is imposing, massive and fearful.  Built in 1862 as a jail and
gallows for the worst of humanity.  "Living"  conditions were sickening and
appalling.  The top floor was reserved for death-row...

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Categories: commenced, scary,
Form: Narrative
Light On the Devil's Chord - Day 30
A whirl, a gust, and a thunderous boom commenced,
Heartened by the latter soreness of silent night,
Shackled through the chill blows above,
A tempest, a storm,
Threshing the world,
Shaking the Prison of Plot,

The waters of the Holy Spirit...

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Categories: commenced, art, destiny, endurance, gospel, inspiration, truth, wisdom,
Form: Epic
Premium Member Chapter 133 -- Damian Delilah Mallory Holannya: Desharah's Party of Feminine Family Festivities
Date:  October  2049

Desharah's birthday party was a
Brawling success. And a Hakim 
Female no male included anywhere 
On their primesis party. The party included 
Amaliah, Desharah, Saderi, Sedanah,
Myselah, Manisha, Salis, Mama
Lucinda, Mama Daughtry she...

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Categories: commenced, birth, color, confidence,
Form: Alliteration
How to attach a shower curtain
How to attach a shower curtain...

I revisit rather than write from scratch
a poem crafted May twenty third 
two thousand and twenty
since the following words apropos
and amply serve a duplicate purpose
of aforementioned title,
when yours truly enlisted
(before...

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Categories: commenced, abuse, angel, appreciation, business, fun, hero, husband,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Exegesis
"Exegesis"



At 7 he was 
thrown to the wolves

Bede marked his territory
hidden secrets 
kept in the abbey

he escaped
went to war
where the unwanted trod

First regiment,
Vietnam
he took with him
like a comfort blanket
his Nicene creed and God

and on returning...

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Categories: commenced, father daughter, love, muse,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Summer Daydream
It was in the heart of frigid winter, that my car had broken down,
I was frustrated and so cold, so like the snowflakes falling down.

I had called for a mechanic, but I had been waiting...

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Categories: commenced, beauty, dream, fantasy, imagery, nature, summer, travel,
Form: Couplet
Premium Member Their World

"Their World"

Of course, there was no re-assurance from them that they would respond to the message I had sent. Morning had arrived. 

The day had commenced as any other, unravelling out of bed, in itself...

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Categories: commenced, muse,
Form: Narrative
Oh My Dog, Another Yesterday May 23rd 2020 Spent Inside
Oh my dog, another yesterday (May 23rd, 2020) spent inside

Anomalous earthling inhabited 
mancave quarantined
cocooned gamesomely 
knowingly protected travesty
impossible mission sidestepping, 
thwarting, zapping
eventuality, inevitability, 

opportunity utilitarian death
crowning glory fêted within 
netherlands immortality
granted courtesy biological 
proliferation offspring...

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Categories: commenced, adventure, celebration, father daughter, forgiveness, i miss
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Barbarossa I
When giants hide their heads beneath the sand,
the body lies unshielded from the Sun.
‘Tis but a hedge to seemingly withstand
the winds of war that nothing will out run.
‘Tis opportune for those that seek to rise...

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Categories: commenced, world war ii,
Form: Crown of Sonnets
How To Attach a Shower Curtain
How to attach a shower curtain...

Suffering permanent anatomical
disfigurement, nonetheless
maintaining marital bliss
at steep price despite more or less
musculoskeletal dislocation,
I eagerly, readily willingly confess.

Ideal for someone whose height
trends toward above average
unless you don't object tilting
head back in...

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Categories: commenced, 12th grade, celebration, encouraging, fun, hilarious, husband,
Form: Free verse

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